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No Thanks I Am Full and Don'T Want Any Whore

I’M FULL THANKS AND DON’T WANT ANY WHORE I am a transient with words unspoken I am a soul who’s been damaged and broken For years I lived someone else’s life Being my son’s little league coach and picking up a drunken wife I’m an unrighteous man who’s weary and far too tired And cannot find my way out of the muck in which I’m mired I yearn for consistency yet find only daily different circumstances A mortal who is always and forever taking chances All I want is one place to live until I live no more And in essence I have become Jesus Christ’s finest whore I am a troubled transient © 2011.….Phreepoetree ~free cee!~

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Date: 8/1/2014 7:09:00 PM
thee best
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:09:00 PM
in my book ever !?!
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:08:00 PM
forget to mention
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:08:00 PM
you are
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:07:00 PM
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:06:00 PM
seven
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:06:00 PM
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Date: 8/1/2014 7:05:00 PM
THEE BEST PHREE CEE
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Date: 10/24/2011 11:03:00 AM
I agree with Deb..well done but I rarely read your work because of the titles you use. This is very very good. BG
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:47:00 AM
Excellent again..and if your titles weren't so OFFPUTTINg others would see the excellence 7 & a fav [I do LIKE the title..though it as usual puts the taint on women..when #1 there is NO TAINT/ NO original sin...geeeezzzz #2 if there was both parties would be equally guilty ..and what is a whore anyway?..what man accomplished by giving eve the blame was an eternal scapegoat to beat for eternity!] Light & Love
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Date: 10/24/2011 10:20:00 AM
Finest whore?..ha,ha...Indeed you are a bit troubled...Ha.ha. Good write.
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