No Tempting, Blue Roses

Is there such a flower as a despised blue rose...
the one I desperately chose
to sign end under a sad story,
which had neither passion or glory?


With tears so rageful, she thought it was the final goodbye;
why I didn't choose a more charming rose with a different color,
perhaps not as red as her unfaithful heart? It wouldn't have been a lie! 
Ever since, I have shunned and hated blue roses despite their splendor.


They tell me that the reason for my unbearable loneliness
is the urge for touching a face slipped from my grip and will;
if I am to blame...why did I love her with intense sweetness,
and nothing was returned besides a promise so brittle?
 

Let me see only red and yellow roses...but no tempting, blue roses;
I couldn't relive moments rejected by a woman so deceitful and ravishing,
and she smiled as they did, but that trust was distant from the beginning...
marring the lovely appearance of that blue rose standing out from others.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/25/2010 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations Andrew on your win in Mac McGovern's contest "The Blue Rose" Love, Carol
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Date: 6/19/2010 10:00:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on your HM in the Blue Rose Contest.. a glorious write and special honor for u my dear friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:56:00 PM
Oh poor blue. Lovely poem. Conratulationsl Love, Joyece
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:05:00 PM
Andrew, congratulations on receiving an HM. So descriptive with vivid imagery, it is superb.
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Date: 6/15/2010 7:00:00 PM
Positively brilliant, Andrew. You have told a very creative story about the "blue rose" and the way it can affect others' lives. Soup mail shortly. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2010 3:25:00 AM
Excellent write, enjoyable read. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 6/15/2010 2:53:00 AM
despised rose beautiful poem, awesome harry
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Date: 6/15/2010 12:58:00 AM
Oh, blue roses are tempting. Good luck in the contest
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