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No Tears For Death

The Choir sang “Rejoice in the LORD Always” ----- REJOICE I Knock at Heaven’s door, His voice says come ----- IN I gasp at the sight of Glory, in a whisper I say oh ----- MY Since Our Everlasting Day : I wait patiently for ---- DEATH This is the Eternity my Heart has been waiting ------ FOR To be One with God ,Together Always You and ---- I Holding hands with Cherubim and Seraphim as We --- JOIN The myriads of Angels, speaking tongues, Singing ---- MY Salvation’s song: with My Dearest, Only Most ------ BELOVED My Wife, My Life, My Heartbeat for ALWAYS ------ LENORE To Praise; Father, Son, and Holy Ghost for Eons of --- FOREVER Inspired By Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen"s "End Line Word" Contest Dedicated To my "Nubbies" L E N O R E ( 1st Place ) The Essence of "End Line Word" Form Thank-YOU POETRYSOUP for YOUR Support and Participation

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Date: 3/4/2010 5:53:00 PM
this is awesome but I am not sure I could do one like that.Nice job.Hope all is well.
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Date: 3/4/2010 5:19:00 PM
Beautiful. Congratulations on your first place win. Sorry I didn't enter this but I couldn't seem to do it. You did a wonderful job. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/3/2010 8:58:00 AM
EXCELLENT End-Line.... Keep em comin....:JP}
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Date: 3/2/2010 8:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this emotional poem, it was a pleasure to read in this new form. well done...Margaret
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Date: 3/2/2010 1:16:00 PM
So many emotions...in the writer and in the reader...I hope your dreams are fulfilled for you are a good man. Life WITH your wife was heaven also...in many ways I'm sure and in memory you still have her, that too is a gift from Higher power one which you do not have to die to revisit. (BIG HUGS!) You are meant to be here, alive, now, "working" on something for which a "body with senses" is required...ponder why you're alive NOW...please, not how great it will be to be dead? Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2010 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, HG...I've asked Audrey to post these comments on my behalf. ...Jimmy
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Date: 3/2/2010 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest HG my forever friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2010 11:58:00 PM
This is a great win as it shines along with your nova Lenore. You are a fine man, HGarvey, I am proud of you, my friend and congratulations to your win, this is deserving. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 3/1/2010 8:22:00 PM
HG, This is an awesome End Line poem! My congratulations on your Ist Place win....a very well-deserved win! We will not rejoice in your death though, we'll rejoice that you lived and we got to know you and hear about your lovely Lenore! I imagine her smiling as you composed this! :) Thanks again for all your encouraging words. Peace, your friend, Audrey
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Date: 3/1/2010 7:51:00 PM
lovely and great congrats
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:59:00 PM
Utterly awesome, HGDaniel! A well deserved victory! Congrats on your win in this new form contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:55:00 PM
Awesome job Hg, Congratulations, on #1. Sincere Agape. Moses
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations, HG on your 1st place win! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:24:00 PM
Very beautiful and deserving win...Love this..Marty
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:19:00 PM
Such a beautiful and touching poem. Fitting that it place first in Dane Ann's contest. Congratulations!! I hope this form continues to take off as it is so creative. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on first place with this wonderful poem in the end line contest ... Constance
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Date: 3/1/2010 4:06:00 PM
A touching, and well deserved win! Congratulations, !! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/1/2010 3:58:00 PM
A huge congrats on your first place win in the first ever End Line Word contest.. a magnificent entry ..an enormous win.. a fitting tribute to one so special... from a great poet.. who will enjoy his place in the winners circle.... congrats ..my silent beau.. from your forever "Sweetheart"...
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Date: 3/1/2010 2:31:00 PM
Congratulations on your first-place win, HG! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2010 7:35:00 PM
Hey HG, you have yourself something going in this end line. This is really a spiritual one, that has some rejoycing in spirit going on. Keep the rhythm going, you go guy. Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/24/2010 2:29:00 PM
Another heart felt end line, excellent write. I had a dream my mother was dressed in white ascending into Heaven when she died at 54, I was 23, I'm now 53. Been writing poems all my life. Used to put them on cards I made up when I was little, then got into typing them when I was in my twenties. Then I started writing on poetry.com in my forties. June Ellen
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Date: 2/24/2010 4:09:00 AM
Great end-line that is a testimony to your and your wife's faith. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/23/2010 6:12:00 PM
and when your time has come to be with Lenore once again, you will be. just as you wished.and you may know when. you'll be lifted.keep going till then. beautiful poem. -Always&Forever your spirit sister, Lynn
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Date: 2/23/2010 12:07:00 PM
Your poem shows an everlasting love that is all too rare. Your Lenore will be patient .Please don't be too eager to leave our world. Thank you for your wonderful words about my poetry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 2/23/2010 4:47:00 AM
No dear no tears for death and no tears for life..Im sure your belove Lenore,wants you to live,she wants to live in you too,cos you are one..She wants to live through you...and when time comes you go and live in Her world,Yet for now live and let her live,dear friend,life is beautiful and this poem going straight to my favorites..If we all could find the love You and Lenore share...thankyou for ths poem you blessed us with..to my favz..Charma
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