Hgarvey Daniel Esquire Poet Free verse

No Tears For Death

The Choir sang “Rejoice in the LORD Always”  -----      REJOICE
I Knock at Heaven’s door, His voice says come   -----      IN
I gasp at the sight of Glory, in a whisper I say oh  -----    MY
Since Our Everlasting Day : I wait patiently for    ----   DEATH
This is the Eternity my Heart has been waiting   ------      FOR
To be One with God ,Together Always You and   ----         I
Holding hands with Cherubim and Seraphim as We  ---  JOIN
The myriads of Angels, speaking tongues, Singing   ----   MY
Salvation’s song: with My Dearest,  Only Most   ------  BELOVED
My Wife, My Life, My Heartbeat for ALWAYS  ------        LENORE
To Praise; Father, Son, and Holy Ghost for Eons of  ---  FOREVER

Inspired By Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen"s "End Line Word" Contest
Dedicated To my "Nubbies" L E N O R E ( 1st Place )

The Essence of "End Line Word" Form Thank-YOU POETRYSOUP for
YOUR Support and Participation

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Colleen Bono March 4, 2010 at 5:53 PM this is awesome but I am not sure I could do one like that.Nice job.Hope all is well.

Joyce Johnson March 4, 2010 at 5:19 PM Beautiful. Congratulations on your first place win. Sorry I didn't enter this but I couldn't seem to do it. You did a wonderful job. Love, Joyce

Jared Pickett March 3, 2010 at 8:58 AM EXCELLENT End-Line.... Keep em comin....:JP}

Margaret Foster March 2, 2010 at 8:07 PM Congratulations on your win with this emotional poem, it was a pleasure to read in this new form. well done...Margaret

Debbie Guzzi March 2, 2010 at 1:16 PM So many emotions...in the writer and in the reader...I hope your dreams are fulfilled for you are a good man. Life WITH your wife was heaven also...in many ways I'm sure and in memory you still have her, that too is a gift from Higher power one which you do not have to die to revisit. (BIG HUGS!) You are meant to be here, alive, now, "working" on something for which a "body with senses" is required...ponder why you're alive NOW...please, not how great it will be to be dead? Light & Love

Jimmy Anderson March 2, 2010 at 1:11 PM Congratulations on your win in the contest, HG...I've asked Audrey to post these comments on my behalf. ...Jimmy

Carol Sunshine Brown March 2, 2010 at 11:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest HG my forever friend. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa March 1, 2010 at 11:58 PM This is a great win as it shines along with your nova Lenore. You are a fine man, HGarvey, I am proud of you, my friend and congratulations to your win, this is deserving. (^_^) Noel.

Audrey Haick March 1, 2010 at 8:22 PM HG, This is an awesome End Line poem! My congratulations on your Ist Place win....a very well-deserved win! We will not rejoice in your death though, we'll rejoice that you lived and we got to know you and hear about your lovely Lenore! I imagine her smiling as you composed this! :) Thanks again for all your encouraging words. Peace, your friend, Audrey

Jessica Arteaga March 1, 2010 at 7:51 PM lovely and great congrats

Caroline Cécile Delacroix March 1, 2010 at 4:59 PM Utterly awesome, HGDaniel! A well deserved victory! Congrats on your win in this new form contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

John Freeman March 1, 2010 at 4:55 PM Awesome job Hg, Congratulations, on #1. Sincere Agape. Moses

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen March 1, 2010 at 4:43 PM Congratulations, HG on your 1st place win! EVERYONE that participated in the first ever End Line Word poetry form contest deserves drum rolls and kudos! Every entry was wonderful. Picking winners was nearly impossible…but had to be done. Thank you very much for supporting this contest. Poetry Soup poets are super!!! Lovingly, Dane Ann

Marty Owens March 1, 2010 at 4:24 PM Very beautiful and deserving win...Love this..Marty

March 1, 2010 at 4:19 PM Such a beautiful and touching poem. Fitting that it place first in Dane Ann's contest. Congratulations!! I hope this form continues to take off as it is so creative. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Constance La France March 1, 2010 at 4:08 PM Congratulations on first place with this wonderful poem in the end line contest ... Constance

Carrie Richards March 1, 2010 at 4:06 PM A touching, and well deserved win! Congratulations, !! Love, Carrie

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 1, 2010 at 3:58 PM A huge congrats on your first place win in the first ever End Line Word contest.. a magnificent entry ..an enormous win.. a fitting tribute to one so special... from a great poet.. who will enjoy his place in the winners circle.... congrats ..my silent beau.. from your forever "Sweetheart"...

Carolyn Devonshire March 1, 2010 at 2:31 PM Congratulations on your first-place win, HG! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman February 25, 2010 at 7:35 PM Hey HG, you have yourself something going in this end line. This is really a spiritual one, that has some rejoycing in spirit going on. Keep the rhythm going, you go guy. Sincere, Agape, Moses

June Ellen Smith February 24, 2010 at 2:29 PM Another heart felt end line, excellent write. I had a dream my mother was dressed in white ascending into Heaven when she died at 54, I was 23, I'm now 53. Been writing poems all my life. Used to put them on cards I made up when I was little, then got into typing them when I was in my twenties. Then I started writing on poetry.com in my forties. June Ellen

Sara Kendrick February 24, 2010 at 4:09 AM Great end-line that is a testimony to your and your wife's faith. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Lynette Chachere February 23, 2010 at 6:12 PM and when your time has come to be with Lenore once again, you will be. just as you wished.and you may know when. you'll be lifted.keep going till then. beautiful poem. -Always&Forever your spirit sister, Lynn

Joyce Johnson February 23, 2010 at 12:07 PM Your poem shows an everlasting love that is all too rare. Your Lenore will be patient .Please don't be too eager to leave our world. Thank you for your wonderful words about my poetry. Love, Joyce

Charmaine Chircop February 23, 2010 at 4:47 AM No dear no tears for death and no tears for life..Im sure your belove Lenore,wants you to live,she wants to live in you too,cos you are one..She wants to live through you...and when time comes you go and live in Her world,Yet for now live and let her live,dear friend,life is beautiful and this poem going straight to my favorites..If we all could find the love You and Lenore share...thankyou for ths poem you blessed us with..to my favz..Charma

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