No Tears

The music blasts in my ears, Blocks out all around me. 

The screaming, the fighting, the crying, the dying, Some where else never here.

My mind ventures off to the land i created, where i am alone, no one to tell me I'm worth nothing, no one to tell me i do wrong, just me alone.

The sun rises the sun sets, The same routine everyday.

No escaping, No where to go, If there was any hope left, I would not sit here the way I am. 

The happiness is gone, The lights have gone out.

I see the stars come closer, as the world around me slowly disappears, slowly vanishing, disinigrating, evaporating, My spirit is gone.

No one notices, no one cares, as for what i see.

How could my life be different?

I will never know.

If i stayed would things be better? 

No more screams, No more tears, Everything is at peace.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/16/2011 5:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Amy
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Date: 5/16/2011 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write this week Amy. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Judy's contest Amy. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 1:58:00 PM
Wow, Amy- A poem describing the intensity of desperation and depression...I sounds as tho the author feels stuck and can't move from a horrible situation. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/13/2011 6:46:00 AM
A deeply saddening poem, written with emotion. Well done on the win x
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Date: 5/12/2011 10:11:00 AM
The monotony and sadness in the world that surround us come through so well in this poem, Amy. Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:34:00 AM
Many congrats Amy on your win......
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:19:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of judy, Amy
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Date: 5/11/2011 11:52:00 PM
I absolutely loved this poem. Although it is a sad, you can feel the emotion and my work reflects similar emotions.
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Date: 5/11/2011 8:10:00 PM
The screams and tears would still be there, amy. This is a sad one. Very intense, and I hope you are not truly this sad! Congrats on your fine poem. Luv, Andrea
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Amy Mccabe
Date: 5/11/2011 11:55:00 PM
i had wrote this a bit after my parents separated. it was a sad time, although i am feeling better about it now. I posted it only because i actually really like it :) and reading all these comments shows that you guys love it to :)
Date: 5/11/2011 6:56:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest
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Amy Mccabe
Date: 5/11/2011 11:55:00 PM
your welcome :) thanks for having it :)
Date: 5/11/2011 4:06:00 PM
Congrats Amy on your super win in Short Poem contest ...knew this one would be top notch luv.. enjoy...
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Amy Mccabe
Date: 5/11/2011 11:32:00 PM
wait wait wait wait wait....are you saying i won?
Date: 5/11/2011 2:48:00 PM
Good job. Congrats
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Date: 5/9/2011 4:53:00 PM
wow, wonderful, a must read, thank you.
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Date: 5/9/2011 1:36:00 PM
An intense write Amy.. nice to shut out the noise surrounding us sometimes and enjoy the peaceful moments luv.. nicely penned..
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Date: 5/9/2011 1:03:00 PM
i really like this poem
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