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No Summer Heat Tonight

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He did not feel the hot summer heat,
For at night the boat was his retreat.
A lissom breeze gave him a great treat.
Smell, the fresh air was fragrant and sweet.

His lass slept quietly at her seat.
Then the sun will rise and both will greet.
Quickly got up and their lips did meet.
Their breakfast prepared so they did eat.

The large boat kept steady, quite a feat.
But time was up, they made a retreat
To the port, a manoeuvre complete.
There the perfect berthing place so neat.

Their big boat so large was like a suite,
It was air-conditioned, they slept sweet.

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/22/2022 11:56:00 AM

Hi Victor what a cute poem my romantic friend, hope you are well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/17/2022 3:26:00 AM

Ahhh!! I like the ending rhymes which are sound alike but not the same in spelling or meaning. I have always enjoyed these kinds of words. LOL..They can trick up spelling for people. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 8/14/2022 4:38:00 PM

Beautiful. I like the imagery and can imagine the experience. :) Sunita UPD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/14/2022 11:34:00 AM

Great rhyming, my friend!! And thanks for visiting several of my poems even though It's so hard for me to keep up with everybody who comments to me!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/14/2022 5:58:00 AM

If not humid, the hot summer heat can be pleasant. A soothing write!

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/13/2022 7:36:00 PM

Excellent Monorhyme, Victor. Once more you take me there.

Joseph May

Date: 8/13/2022 3:39:00 AM

Cooling out on their boat in the summer heat, Very nicely penned Victor

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/13/2022 2:38:00 AM

who would not sleep sweet in a place like that, nicely penned dear Victor, wishing you a beautiful day full of inspired thoughts xo

Valsa George

Date: 8/12/2022 8:28:00 PM

Their stay in the boat, without doubt, must have been so sweet with the cool breeze around, the calm waters and love playing in their heart ! On reading this poem we also feel making a sweet voyage. Now you are at your creative best, dear Victor !

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 8/12/2022 8:14:00 PM

Cool bliss on the sea is something quite pleasant to imagine in this summer heat. Wonderfully writing, my friend. :)

Michael Tor

Date: 8/12/2022 6:17:00 PM

Victor wish I was out there on your created retreat. I could use some R and R. Enjoyed reading my friend.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 8/12/2022 1:46:00 PM

How lovely to be on a retreat, not having to bear the summer heat. It’s so hot here in the UK it feels as if we’ll all melt away. Good writing Victor…Belle

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/12/2022 10:35:00 AM

With this poetry, I was able to relax and drift off to a place where gorgeous darlings were all over. Vivid imagery and a great poem. Have a nice weekend my friend.