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No Summer Heat Tonight

He did not feel the hot summer heat,
For at night the boat was his retreat.
A lissom breeze gave him a great treat.
Smell, the fresh air was fragrant and sweet.

His lass slept quietly at her seat.
Then the sun will rise and both will greet.
Quickly got up and their lips did meet.
Their breakfast prepared so they did eat.

The large boat kept steady, quite a feat.
But time was up, they made a retreat
To the port, a manoeuvre complete.
There the perfect berthing place so neat.

Their big boat so large was like a suite,
It was air-conditioned, they slept sweet. 
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Proxenos Avatar
August 22, 2022 at 11:56 AM
Hi Victor what a cute poem my romantic friend, hope you are well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Kendrick Avatar
August 17, 2022 at 3:26 AM
Ahhh!! I like the ending rhymes which are sound alike but not the same in spelling or meaning. I have always enjoyed these kinds of words. LOL..They can trick up spelling for people. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara
U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 4:38 PM
Beautiful. I like the imagery and can imagine the experience. :) Sunita UPD
Dietrich Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 11:34 AM
Great rhyming, my friend!! And thanks for visiting several of my poems even though It's so hard for me to keep up with everybody who comments to me!!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 5:58 AM
If not humid, the hot summer heat can be pleasant. A soothing write!
Horsman Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 7:36 PM
Excellent Monorhyme, Victor. Once more you take me there.
May Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 3:39 AM
Cooling out on their boat in the summer heat, Very nicely penned Victor
Rose  Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 2:38 AM
who would not sleep sweet in a place like that, nicely penned dear Victor, wishing you a beautiful day full of inspired thoughts xo
George Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 8:28 PM
Their stay in the boat, without doubt, must have been so sweet with the cool breeze around, the calm waters and love playing in their heart ! On reading this poem we also feel making a sweet voyage. Now you are at your creative best, dear Victor !
Buehler Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 8:14 PM
Cool bliss on the sea is something quite pleasant to imagine in this summer heat. Wonderfully writing, my friend. :)
Tor Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 6:17 PM
Victor wish I was out there on your created retreat. I could use some R and R. Enjoyed reading my friend.
Edmonds  Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:46 PM
How lovely to be on a retreat, not having to bear the summer heat. It’s so hot here in the UK it feels as if we’ll all melt away. Good writing Victor…Belle
Poet Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 10:35 AM
With this poetry, I was able to relax and drift off to a place where gorgeous darlings were all over. Vivid imagery and a great poem. Have a nice weekend my friend.
Cunningham Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 6:19 AM
Sounds like my kind of place in this unforgiving heat, 37c here at the moment in the UK. Tom
Pandit Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Their own little private retreat. Perfect for luring romance.
Skelly Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 3:50 AM
Really enjoyed sailing away with this poem...Delice
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