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No Success Comes Without Struggle

No successes come without a struggle A pity to wallow in life’s sorrow To focus on our problems and trouble Dims potential for better tomorrows Seek the positive side, never borrow The following day’s ill-defined boggle Consider Egypt's stubborn king Pharoah No successes come without a struggle. Never seeing magic, the droll muggle Knowing not a miracle may follow One learns, interestingly, to juggle A pity to wallow in life’s sorrow. I think unlikely we will ever know Success, only enjoying fate’s snuggle Avoid looking for the better morrows To focus on our problems and trouble. Struggles come in quicker-time, redouble Sometimes successes bring slow bravados Concentrating on a problem’s rubble Dims potential for better tomorrows So, learn to balance your joys and sorrows Focus on the forward steps, not trouble From tomorrow’s woes surely don’t borrow Above all, be especially humble, ...No success comes without struggle. Written March 3, 2021 Poem inspired by Constance La France's Contest "Life's Struggles" Not entered in the contest!

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Date: 3/5/2021 1:50:00 AM
More wise words here. My own viewpoint on this theme is this: Anything good is worth struggling for. / Maurice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 3/5/2021 8:50:00 AM
I couldn't agree more, Maurice. Much of life is a struggle, and when you stop to think about it, a newborn really goes through one helluva struggle just to get born!
Date: 3/4/2021 2:46:00 AM
Exceptional write. I love it and it's a sure winner. Brilliant write. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 3/4/2021 9:07:00 AM
Thanks, Regina. I didn't enter it. I wrote another poem for the contest. I really like this form...but it is rather difficult because it requires so many rhymes on two different words. Again, thanks.

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