no strings

daybreak curtain call a symphony of sparrows loudly tuning up

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/30/2024 6:39:00 PM

How come those sparrows were so loud without strings?! ~ Nicolo Paganini

Ilene Bauer

Date: 7/30/2024 1:34:00 PM

wonderful, john! i enjoyed...

John Lawless
Date: 7/30/2024 3:04:00 PM

glad you enjoyed it Ilene

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/30/2024 12:27:00 PM

every 5 30am, I hear the tweeters calling me non-stop...amazing poe, John!

John Lawless
Date: 7/30/2024 3:04:00 PM

I sometime had a percussionist woodpecker show up....

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/30/2024 8:10:00 AM

This is wonderful! Made me smile wide, thank you. xomo

Lin Lane

Date: 7/30/2024 6:57:00 AM

My kind of morning wake up call. Usually, I'm up before the performers and take the best seat in my house to wait for their trills.

John Lawless
Date: 7/30/2024 3:03:00 PM

OH, you trill seeker you....