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The cold night air wraps around my shoulders like a moth-eaten shawl. A rasping rain pelts the bitter sidewalk below. Visions of what once was flash in and out of the headlights passing by. How did it all go so wrong, as lovers become nothing more than mere strangers? Your heart has grown so hardened to my pleading touch. Ghosts we have become, passing through each other in our home that has slowly become our tomb. Words have become a foreign language to each other's ears. How did this divide go from small fractures to seismic shifts? We loved each other so, now we lay next to each other like phantoms. How do we bring back the light within our souls, Before we slip through the cracks of this cold, lonely cityscape? Shivers run up my spine as it's getting close to 2 a.m. now. I stick my hands in my weeping pockets and jingle my freezing keys, Look at the blank screen of my phone, waiting for you to call—but you never do anymore. I guess it's time to start walking home; you'll be long in bed. I try to tell myself we can find our love again, I just know it, if we try hard enough. Walk up to the rain-soaked building, enter with silent tears in my eyes. Put down my keys, take off my coat, and crawl into bed, Hoping that when the first rays of sun peek through the blinds of the windows, The space between us will slowly evaporate like dewdrops on a flower petal.

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Date: 4/28/2025 1:58:00 PM
I love your style of writing, I felt a bit of sadness and sweetness all at the same time. This is a great poem, hope you keep receiving more comments, be blessed
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/29/2025 1:33:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/23/2025 8:13:00 PM
I like your style of writing
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/24/2025 1:33:00 PM
Thank you so much.
Date: 4/21/2025 10:21:00 AM
Hello Sara, A belated congrats. on hyour POTD. sometimes one partner loses the love for the partner. I think love could be recapture3d. belated Happy Easter. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/24/2025 3:55:00 PM
Hello Sara, Oh good to hear you are happily married. I enjoyed it anyway. I hope you had a Happy Easter. thank you. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/21/2025 11:11:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my work. It is fictional. I am happily married. Happy Belated Easter.
Date: 2/7/2025 10:02:00 AM
I must have missed this one, Sara, gone somewhere. Poetry so good, it is refreshing , a new star is born here...Welcome and Congratulations on your POTD/Trophy win it's rare!!!
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/21/2025 11:09:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 2/7/2025 7:23:00 AM
Ahh look, a trophy win and a POTD! Well deserved, enjoyed the interesting word choices throughout. I know there's a more recent POTD too - excellent stats :)
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Sara Jama
Date: 4/21/2025 11:09:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 10/10/2024 7:27:00 PM
‘ The space between us will slowly evaporate like dewdrops on a flower petal’ … this is a favorite line of poetry for me. Congrats on the trophy win and POTD. Your work is stunning.
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Sara Jama
Date: 10/11/2024 11:32:00 AM
Thank you for hosting and choosing me as your winner.
Date: 10/10/2024 6:42:00 AM
Potd and a top placement. I think Aura had this experience recently. Good for you!
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Sara Jama
Date: 10/11/2024 11:32:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/22/2024 2:50:00 AM
Sara this emotive gem captures the angst with a beauty and elegance! I don’t know how I missed this gem! Belated congratulations on potd!
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/22/2024 6:28:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/19/2024 11:52:00 PM
Hi Sara, Congratulations on your well deserved POTD. People touch another lives in passing right through life, and then may move on leaving the other enriched in one way or another. What never ceases to puzzle me is why - to quote you -' Lovers become nothing more than mere strangers' - when the parting comes - Enmity develops sometimes and yet they have shared something beautiful in the past. Thanks for sharing. Maria
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/20/2024 5:45:00 AM
Thank you for reading.
Date: 9/19/2024 7:00:00 PM
Wow, Lovely poem. I especially liked the last line. Congratulations on your POTD! Thanks for sharing.
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/20/2024 5:44:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/19/2024 11:39:00 AM
Congratulations, Sara. Many go through this space, not once, but several times. A well penned poem, indeed. A friend of mine told me this: You do not have to go looking for love when it is where you come from! Letting go of the past is a growing and healing process. I wish you love! Pangie
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/19/2024 12:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading. This poem is inspired by the Glenn Hughes song No Stranger To Love. I am happily married to my loving wife.
Date: 9/19/2024 10:49:00 AM
Like a flower, we need ' tender loving care, ' in order to bloom. And, continue to grow. So sad when emotions cause a pull between two hearts. Your thoughts caress gently around me. Congratulations Sara, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/19/2024 12:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading.
Date: 9/19/2024 8:31:00 AM
Dear Sara, a moving poem which touches the soul. Relationships getting distant...although very sad, happens. You have portrayed the picture of an almost-broken relationship with brilliant images and metaphors. Enjoyed, although sad! Congratulations on POTD, Warm wishes to you ~ Mala
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/19/2024 10:06:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and for the kind words.
Date: 9/19/2024 6:11:00 AM
Well look who made the algorithm grade! Whatever brings us to this point, it's nice to see newer ones get featured. Enjoy your special day. No screaming ;)
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/19/2024 10:04:00 AM
Thank you. It's good to be here.
Date: 9/19/2024 5:10:00 AM
Dear Sara, what a deep emotional poem of gradual loss of the one we love. I could feel every line in your imagery and metaphors bringing forth empathy from my being. It is truly a great POTD with a chance for confession of the soul. Congratulations! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/19/2024 6:29:00 AM
Thank you very much for the thoughtful comments and for reading my poem.
Date: 9/19/2024 4:31:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. Your lovely poem is a lively romance that leaves the reader asking, "what happens next?".
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/19/2024 4:56:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading.
Date: 9/19/2024 3:27:00 AM
Sara, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD.
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/19/2024 4:59:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 9/19/2024 1:29:00 AM
Wow im glad i checked potd today! And its so good to see you featured! Congratulations on your first ever poem of the day! And i hope you know this is a sign that you should post here on soup as well more often hahah! Well deserved! Many should read and appreciate your poetry! You are one talented poet even on insta! Sending you light soul sis
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Date: 9/19/2024 1:04:00 AM
It’s so sad when love goes drab, a very moving write Sara. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/19/2024 5:00:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/19/2024 12:32:00 AM
Congratulations to you Sara, on today's POTD honour. Tom
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/19/2024 5:00:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 9/18/2024 10:01:00 AM
Dear sara! Its so good to see you post here huh grumpy geek goth! And i love how it is a mix of light and dark and gives that evocative touch with questions flowing in such eloquence! Sometimes yes, we question how we become strangers while lying next to the familiar soul that has seem so much with us! So poignant and touching! And the emotions within these lines really stood out for me! I kno you love black sabbath and its good to see you write inspired by the lyrics! Best wishes! Keep writing and posting on soup more! Its refreshing to read poems like this!
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/18/2024 10:16:00 AM
Thank you so much Ink. I always appreciate your support. Yes you know my musical tastes. And how It helps me write.
Date: 9/18/2024 6:04:00 AM
Poignant take on a love gone stale and at the point of near rot. Can it be saved? Time will tell but not looking good. The last two lines demonstrate the last bit of hope before the darkness takes over completely
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Sara Jama
Date: 9/18/2024 6:37:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to read my poem. I appreciate your thoughtful comments.

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