No Sleep

A tired young man with no sleep Heard it would help to count sheep Made his way up to ten But got scared by a hen And the big stick of Little Bo Peep

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Kp Nunez

Date: 5/13/2015 3:42:00 PM

Ah, such cruelty invades even imaginations! Very good, Tim. :-)

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/13/2015 11:37:00 AM

Hi Tim... I'm back to visit your uplifting limericks and poetry. This one is so true, with a twist of cruel nursery rhyme characters added to the mix :) Love it !!

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 5/12/2015 11:13:00 PM

You'll end up doing young Jack out of a job if you keep up this standard Tim - Lindsay

Tim Smith
Date: 5/12/2015 11:15:00 PM

He is the master and I only his pupil.....don't think I can keep them rolling like Santa Jack

David Meade

Date: 5/12/2015 11:11:00 PM

You are very good at these . . . I have seen a few scary hens in my day . . . 7

Arthur Vaso

Date: 5/12/2015 10:48:00 PM

Little Bo Peep plays Hockey? LOL

Tim Smith
Date: 5/12/2015 11:16:00 PM

Hear she is a goalie ....lol ..... Nobody ever scores

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2015 2:53:00 PM

- Much fun,Tim !!! - Love it :)))- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2015 2:21:00 PM

lol made me giggle Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 5/12/2015 11:18:00 AM

HEHE!! GOOD ONE!! :D :D :D

Poesy Relish

Date: 5/12/2015 10:09:00 AM

Lol .. nice one Tim... nad!