No Sin To Atone

Romeo’s left bereft, ill tidings his Juliet’s dead
         Kneels beside, placing a kiss upon her head 
             Trembling in despair, she feels so cold, 
        Decides to search the afterlife, rejoin her soul

            Chalice of poison, sits upon tables near
          Drinks it down, whilst choking back tears,
           A destroyed man, desperate beyond woe
            These his final words, so my story goes 

              First time we met, I finally felt whole 
         Oh what tenderness, sweet longings behold 
            Those beautiful eyes, captured my heart 
        When you spoke, an angels voice took it apart 

       We shut out feuding memories, kept open minds
        Our families mutual hatred, was all cast behind 
           Sharing real dreams, whilst walking alone 
            Healing raw scars, etched into our bones 

          Looked at each other, only beauty was seen
          Now a past reflection, of what could’ve been 
          Why are we in hell, condemned for no crime
          Our life was heaven, even the stars realigned 

          Tomorrow was predestined, then faded away 
           Now I lay here moribund, beside you, today 
           As Romeo drew his last breath, Juliet awoke 
        Somehow she heard, loving words he just spoke

            Darling Romeo lies dead, limp by her side 
           Utter tragedy befell, on the turn of one tide
          Without hesitation, she unsheathed his sword 
         From Juliet’s broken heart, blood starts to pour

         Placed her arms around him, in gentle embrace 
          Finally together, never again shall they awake 
      What purpose holds sorrow, when love ends in vain
      Death the only known antidote, to kill undying pain. 

By
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Flaherty Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 12:26 PM
David You speak of Loves truths. Vanity , sorrow can't heal a broken heart only death can take the pain away When love is taken Brilliant
Flaherty Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 1:36 PM
I dare not speak it but yes Suicide did come or spring 1st to mind. Sad but eternal tragedy
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December 7, 2020 at 1:18 PM
Thanks Christopher, it’s a horrible thought, but some feelings are so strong, true love is a blessing, yet a curse when ending in tragedy, I’m not saying suicide is the answer, but I understand why people take that path, damn that Shakespeare is a genius, cheers David
Ermine Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 5:45 AM
Greetings, David. Your Ultimate Love depiction is poinant, the Bard would be proud to read. I agree, tragedy and strongest feelings walk in partnership...
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 6, 2020 at 6:40 AM
They do indeed Sigrid, I find them both inseparable and understandable, two sides of the same sword, one is meaningless without the other, cheers David
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2020 at 11:28 AM
No one wins when suicide happens for whatever reason. Enjoyed your interpretation of Romeo and Juliet. Your visit to my page is uplifting. Sara
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December 5, 2020 at 11:54 AM
One good turn deserves another thank you Sara, I don’t believe it was a matter of winning, the suicide is purely symbolic of true love, cheers David
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