No Signs of a Struggle

was told that if s/he studied 
hard in high school, not taking time
out to party, that she’d get into 
college &
there were 
no signs of a struggle.

was told that if s/he did well in
college, when s/he got out, s/he’d
get a good job, be able to pay back
all his/her loans & would be able
to build a good life &
there were no signs of a struggle.

was told that if s/he worked really
hard at her/his job, spending more
than normal full time hours in the
office, that it would all pay off &
eventually, s/he’d have time to
kick back &
there were no signs of a struggle.

was told that finding a monogamous
relationship that led to marriage was
the way to be & settling down was
what everybody was doing &
there were no signs of a struggle.

was told that having a kid was the 
next thing to do, that it would bring
a newness to the already fading 
relationship between her/him & said
spouse &
there were no signs of a struggle.

was told that once the child was
raised, s/he’d have time after to enjoy
the time when s/he was retired &
then s/he’d be happy (and there were
no signs of a struggle).

was told that sickness had invaded their
life & so s/he started to buy into a
“faith” of some kind, which would 
promise happiness in the next life or
another life, or somewhere else besides
here &
there were no signs of a struggle.

was found dead just like the rest of us
will be, but 
with no signs of a struggle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/7/2012 7:13:00 AM
The weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Andrew. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol
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