Get Your Premium Membership

No Signs of a Struggle

was told that if s/he studied 
hard in high school, not taking time
out to party, that she’d get into 
college &
there were 
no signs of a struggle.

was told that if s/he did well in
college, when s/he got out, s/he’d
get a good job, be able to pay back
all his/her loans & would be able
to build a good life &
there were no signs of a struggle.

was told that if s/he worked really
hard at her/his job, spending more
than normal full time hours in the
office, that it would all pay off &
eventually, s/he’d have time to
kick back &
there were no signs of a struggle.

was told that finding a monogamous
relationship that led to marriage was
the way to be & settling down was
what everybody was doing &
there were no signs of a struggle.

was told that having a kid was the 
next thing to do, that it would bring
a newness to the already fading 
relationship between her/him & said
spouse &
there were no signs of a struggle.

was told that once the child was
raised, s/he’d have time after to enjoy
the time when s/he was retired &
then s/he’d be happy (and there were
no signs of a struggle).

was told that sickness had invaded their
life & so s/he started to buy into a
“faith” of some kind, which would 
promise happiness in the next life or
another life, or somewhere else besides
here &
there were no signs of a struggle.

was found dead just like the rest of us
will be, but 
with no signs of a struggle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/7/2012 7:13:00 AM
The weekend is about to begin and I am enjoying reading such amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am so pleased to see your writings posted here Andrew. Hoping you have a happy sun filled weekend full of love, joy and inspiration. Love, Carol
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry