White Wolf Poet Sonnet

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No Second Glance

Oh how sweet thy fragrance is from thy hair
I'm captivated by your every move
In your presence, I cannot help but stare
Your porcelain skin so tenderly smooth

With eyes that shine like diamonds in the night
As they seductively scan through the room
Poised you stood, like an angel shedding light
In a garden of weeds, I watched you bloom

I asked you your name but got no reply
My nerves feeling shaky, what could I do?
Your beauty had thrown me, I had to try
Out of my league, but I still needed you

To take a chance on this future romance
But alas, she gave me no second glance

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Vera Duggan July 3, 2017 at 2:23 AM Beautiful sonnet WW and beautiful picture, so romantic, you are never too old my friend, thank you for sharing and take care.......Vera

Elizabeth Kinch July 3, 2017 at 12:27 AM Such a beautiful sonnet. All that glitters is not gold however WW, how rude of her not to answer you!! You need to find the girl with the beautiful heart and then her beauty will shine on you! White Wolf July 3, 2017 at 12:30 AM Yes, I know they do exist, somewhere!!! Haha, thanks, Elizabeth /|\

Jeremy Smith July 2, 2017 at 3:07 PM How sad but hey I'm sure there are prettier girls out there :) White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 3:12 PM This was merely an ancient memory, I don't look anymore! /|\

Daniel Turner July 2, 2017 at 2:13 PM Obviously stereotyping:) I like this sonnet because it's true to life. Great sonnet, WW White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 2:17 PM Yes, I sure all men can relate to this scenario! Thanks, Daniel /|\

Lin Lane July 2, 2017 at 11:11 AM You don't have to pluck the flower to enjoy its beauty or its aroma. A very well written sonnet. White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 11:13 AM But it's the "plucking" that makes life fun!!! Haha. So true, Lin /|\

Robert Lindley July 2, 2017 at 9:22 AM A fine sonnet for me to find and enjoy reading this morn. Alas! As a --young man-- there was a few dozen beauties that cared not to give me even a second glance. Thus, I cast my net elsewhere and was rewarded with other beauties--as women are beautifully and heavenly creatures! A blessing unto man.. A FAV.. White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 9:27 AM You are right there, Robert! My "casting" days are well over now, I am more content on my own these days! Thanks for reading, my friend /|\

Kim Rodrigues July 2, 2017 at 8:34 AM Unfortunately not every bloom will land in your hand. Nevertheless to experience the beauty and the heart. Lovely, White Wolf! Love the pic as well, my friend! White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 8:36 AM Thanks, Kim! Much appreciated /|\

Janice Canerdy July 2, 2017 at 7:16 AM Disappointment well described, White Wolf! Janice White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 7:26 AM Thank you, Janice /|\

Darren White July 2, 2017 at 6:26 AM Lol @ the discourse between you and Demetrios :D But I love the sonnet my friend! White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 6:39 AM Haha, yes, he is quite the character! Thank you, my friend /|\

Probir Gupta July 2, 2017 at 5:58 AM Alas! ... and from the unfulfillment arose the beautiful sonnet ... White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 6:03 AM Thank you for your lovely comment /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis July 2, 2017 at 1:51 AM My friend WW if ever there is a lady that you are intrested in and she doesn't give you " a second glane" she doesn't deserve you! Marvelous romantic Sonnet! Demetrios Trifiatis July 2, 2017 at 2:38 AM ...a wolf doesn't know what to do with his...prey? Impossible! Haha! White Wolf July 2, 2017 at 1:55 AM I enjoy the chase, but don't know what to do when I have them! Haha! Thank you for your kind words, Demetrios /|\