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No Second Glance

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Oh how sweet thy fragrance is from thy hair I'm captivated by your every move In your presence, I cannot help but stare Your porcelain skin so tenderly smooth With eyes that shine like diamonds in the night As they seductively scan through the room Poised you stood, like an angel shedding light In a garden of weeds, I watched you bloom I asked you your name but got no reply My nerves feeling shaky, what could I do? Your beauty had thrown me, I had to try Out of my league, but I still needed you To take a chance on this future romance But alas, she gave me no second glance

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Vera Duggan

Date: 7/3/2017 2:23:00 AM

Beautiful sonnet WW and beautiful picture, so romantic, you are never too old my friend, thank you for sharing and take care.......Vera

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 7/3/2017 12:27:00 AM

Such a beautiful sonnet. All that glitters is not gold however WW, how rude of her not to answer you!! You need to find the girl with the beautiful heart and then her beauty will shine on you!

White Wolf
Date: 7/3/2017 12:30:00 AM

Yes, I know they do exist, somewhere!!! Haha, thanks, Elizabeth /|\

Jeremy Smith

Date: 7/2/2017 3:07:00 PM

How sad but hey I'm sure there are prettier girls out there :)

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 3:12:00 PM

This was merely an ancient memory, I don't look anymore! /|\

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/2/2017 2:13:00 PM

Obviously stereotyping:) I like this sonnet because it's true to life. Great sonnet, WW

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 2:17:00 PM

Yes, I sure all men can relate to this scenario! Thanks, Daniel /|\

Lin Lane

Date: 7/2/2017 11:11:00 AM

You don't have to pluck the flower to enjoy its beauty or its aroma. A very well written sonnet.

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 11:13:00 AM

But it's the "plucking" that makes life fun!!! Haha. So true, Lin /|\

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/2/2017 9:22:00 AM

A fine sonnet for me to find and enjoy reading this morn. Alas! As a --young man-- there was a few dozen beauties that cared not to give me even a second glance. Thus, I cast my net elsewhere and was rewarded with other beauties--as women are beautifully and heavenly creatures! A blessing unto man.. A FAV..

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 9:27:00 AM

You are right there, Robert! My "casting" days are well over now, I am more content on my own these days! Thanks for reading, my friend /|\

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/2/2017 8:34:00 AM

Unfortunately not every bloom will land in your hand. Nevertheless to experience the beauty and the heart. Lovely, White Wolf! Love the pic as well, my friend!

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 8:36:00 AM

Thanks, Kim! Much appreciated /|\

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/2/2017 7:16:00 AM

Disappointment well described, White Wolf! Janice

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 7:26:00 AM

Thank you, Janice /|\

Darren White

Date: 7/2/2017 6:26:00 AM

Lol @ the discourse between you and Demetrios :D But I love the sonnet my friend!

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 6:39:00 AM

Haha, yes, he is quite the character! Thank you, my friend /|\

Probir Gupta

Date: 7/2/2017 5:58:00 AM

Alas! ... and from the unfulfillment arose the beautiful sonnet ...

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 6:03:00 AM

Thank you for your lovely comment /|\

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/2/2017 1:51:00 AM

My friend WW if ever there is a lady that you are intrested in and she doesn't give you " a second glane" she doesn't deserve you! Marvelous romantic Sonnet!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/2/2017 2:38:00 AM

...a wolf doesn't know what to do with his...prey? Impossible! Haha!

White Wolf
Date: 7/2/2017 1:55:00 AM

I enjoy the chase, but don't know what to do when I have them! Haha! Thank you for your kind words, Demetrios /|\