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-No Second Chance

Eighteen

Bright future

No seat belt

Gone

Final

No second chance

Devastation left behind

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Kevin Cummings

January 5, 2025 at 12:14 PM

Wow - like a shot to the heart.

Deb M

January 5, 2025 at 12:25 PM

Thanks Kevin….it was so sad….a member of my family ….my nephew ….was a friend with the boys and is the same age….my nephew started driving at the same time…when its so close to home the reality of it hits you harder and its frightening! Thankyou for your comment Kevin….Debx

Kai Michael Neumann

October 20, 2024 at 3:50 AM

So very sad. Short poem, short life.

Deb M

January 5, 2025 at 12:27 PM

Yes indeed Kai….just coming into their own at eighteen…wasted! Thanks…Debx

Jan Allison

July 25, 2024 at 3:38 PM

aww Deb this is heartbreaking on so many levels - i know there was a seat belt advert many years ago - 'clunk click every trip' - perhaps they should re do it but end up with a more serious message at the end:-( hugs jan xx

Deb M

July 25, 2024 at 3:44 PM

A sad reality around the world….teenagers believe they are infallible and when alcohol is involved disasters happen! Thanks Jan…..Debx

Ilene Bauer

July 24, 2024 at 12:28 PM

your very short poem packs a powerful punch, deb! excellent!

Deb M

July 24, 2024 at 1:43 PM

Oh thanks ilene....a true unbelievably sad tale to tell though.... just starting out in life then one bad decision or thoughtless moment and it's all gone....never coming back! Sorrow and devastation left behind....A familiar tale worldwide! Thankyou my friend....Debx

Paige Hind

July 24, 2024 at 11:15 AM

This is so tragic. I hope the person recovered.

Deb M

July 24, 2024 at 1:36 PM

Unfortunately not Paige one dead and one in intensive care having had a couple of brain ops and in an induced coma! Such loss and sorrow! Thanks Paige... Debx

Jay Narain

July 24, 2024 at 9:59 AM

SORRY FOR THE TRAGIC END. PRETTY SOON CAR WO'NT START UNTIL EVERONE WEARS SEAT BELT.

Deb M

July 24, 2024 at 1:34 PM

Jay that is a great idea...a car not starting until all seat beats are clipped in....its a good start anyway!! Thanks Jay! Debx

Karen Jones

July 24, 2024 at 9:07 AM

Oh this packs a punch! So many lose life and or limbs from being careless about not wearing a seatbelt! A sad reality Deb! Great poem!

Deb M

July 24, 2024 at 1:32 PM

You are so right Karen a sad reality....too many stories like this one world wide! Thanks my friend...Debx

Tom Cunningham

July 24, 2024 at 8:27 AM

So tragic Deb, 18 is no age. First thing everyone should do is belt up before starting off. Tom

Deb M

July 24, 2024 at 1:30 PM

It is Tom...18yrs old only starting out in life so young and the poor family....makes me so sad Tom! Thanks...Debx

Daniel Henry Rodgers

July 24, 2024 at 8:12 AM

Dear Deb, How powerful, and it truly speaks to the person who is devastated by not putting on their seat belts and is in a terrible accident. Well inked! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Deb M

July 24, 2024 at 1:28 PM

The teenager died that didn't have his seat belt on the driver has had several brain ops already an in a induced coma... the devastation is what and who is left behind! Such a waste! Thanks Daniel....Debx

Joseph P. DiMino

July 24, 2024 at 2:47 AM

Yes...I lost a loved one in a devastating accident. Someone negligent. Seat belts...and lighter on the accelerator. Get to smell the roses. Blessings. Well said.

Deb M

July 24, 2024 at 5:10 AM

In one thoughtless moment or one bad decision lives are changed forever….no second chance! It breaks my heart Joe…such a waste a young life or lives over just like that ! I am sorry you lost a loved one this way Joe and have had to experience that devastation and sorrow first hand! Thankyou….Debx

-No Second Chance

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