No Roundabout- Its a Straight Road

Love is ultimate, but with you it was fatal. I had lots of laughter not until I said “I love you too!”. Number two was my certified location b’cos I’ve always reverenced you so high at the topmost of priorities. Your gladness was much more than my enjoyment, it germinated into compulsory duties I had to perform. My pride became your belt and my shame, your underpants. The definition of me translated to the adoration of you. I worry to give us a balance but you hurry to topple the equilibrium. My life, a spreadsheet of your errands, subjecting my feelings into a standby to suit your taste and exhausting comfort. But one day! The slightest of contact with an acid will change the litmus colour and a continuous debt by a tenant will abruptly render him homeless. Your oil is used up, the engine is knocked and the lamp has gone dark. A heart so tender, you deserve not. Arms once warm have been frozen to rigor motes. My back is turned towards you and that beauty, you’ll never see again. Go and taste the seedlings of the city’s daughters and the well sauced soups of its young maidens. I’m no longer yours even if nature advocates for mercy. Consider my sweetness and calm now as stones mixed in dough, baked and served with vinegar. You proclaim “I’m now a completely changed man”, I believe you, but for the next girl. Know this Mr. Irresistible guy, even if you’re the last birth of all men I’ll never again present my affections for your selfish trade. Goodbye my past lover, I sincerely wish you well.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Goff Avatar
June 24, 2018 at 7:46 AM
This work infuses strength, Funom...honest and forthright...
Makama Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 1:12 PM
I am so lucky to have you navigate my work... Thank you so much James
Spagnola Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 6:49 PM
Oh! your verse oozes the reasons apropo for a changed man. I love your write, jill
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:39 AM
Thank you so much Jill
Quinlan Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 8:27 AM
"once frozen to rigor motes" ----very well coined and another favourite and well word worked line was "Go and taste the seedlings......cities daughters" which holds a lot of impact to that as well! I think this deserves a high 7! A lot of word power speaks true here. Thanks for sharing....didee
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much Diane
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 8, 2015 at 1:30 AM
some lines are really wow! drawing the readers eyes to read more!!!! wow!~olive eloisa
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much Olive
Freeman Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 1:09 PM
Sounds familiar my friend, been there done that! Cool words, put together well. Thanks for your comment, Agape Moses
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much John
Carmack Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 8:15 AM
"Go and taste the seedlings of the city’s daughters" --- awesome.
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much rob
Sathasivam Avatar
June 7, 2015 at 2:30 AM
Excellent. Passionate write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Thank you so much Ravi
Guzzi Avatar
June 5, 2015 at 8:41 PM
Wow some great lines in here a fav & a 7 Light & Love Debbie
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:37 AM
Thank you so much Debbie
Goff Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 9:30 PM
Funom....to mine faves! This is truly momentous! No exageration! Especially....how you leap & twist the images...."stones mixed in dough, and served with vinegar" Man! That's flavor! One of the best poems ever read here...whwn Drake Ezses returns with his "blog talk worldwide radio" please read this over the airwaves! Jimbo
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Thank you so much James
Mckenzie Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 3:17 PM
Wow what a strong deep writer you are! Thank you for your comments on Silver hue! I don't come on here often but I will remember to look at your talented spread of poetry! Have a great day!!!!! :) Laura
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Thank you so much Laura
Kendrick Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 3:10 PM
Passionate work.. Thanks for the visit to my page...The title of this work got my attention..The work itself was not what I expected so I was surprised at the content..Sara
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:36 AM
Thank you so much Sara
La France Avatar
June 4, 2015 at 11:20 AM
Funom, this write is full of emotions and strength, when two pieces of the puzzle do not fit nothing can change that, a7, and thanks for visiting my poem, a special gift
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:35 AM
Thank you so much Broken Wings
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June 4, 2015 at 10:02 AM
A different and unique way to express love gone sour...I honestly loved it...and I'm impressed......which is a compliment ...because in actuality, I am easy to please and hard to impress.....great poetry....your on my Favorite poets list now...and a BIG 7.....
Makama Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Thank you so much Judy
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