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No Room For Bees

The social tree filled to its limbitations with youthfulness. Quite full of itself - shivering in vivacity and playfulness. Va-va-voom of t o o many birds, no room for bees. But those buzzers sure know how to shake those coconuts free. 8/16/2021 YOUR BEST FOUR-LINE LIGHT VERSE L. Milton Hankins AABB

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Date: 8/20/2021 1:29:00 PM
Makes me think of how the birds land on the apple tree in my backyard and shake the apples off - great contest entry, Kim~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/20/2021 7:05:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 8/17/2021 7:10:00 AM
THANKS FOR THE SMILE kIM:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2021 7:19:00 AM
Thank you for s m i l i n g! Makes my day, Jan!
Date: 8/17/2021 6:12:00 AM
I can feel the effects of your poems, a hint of humour. Loved it. Hugs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/17/2021 6:37:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! ~ hugs

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