Kim Rodrigues Poet Light Verse

No Room For Bees

The social tree filled to its limbitations with youthfulness.
Quite full of itself - shivering in vivacity and playfulness.
Va-va-voom of    t o o    many birds, no room for bees.
But those buzzers sure know how to shake those coconuts free.

8/16/2021
YOUR BEST FOUR-LINE LIGHT VERSE
L. Milton Hankins
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Michelle Faulkner August 20, 2021 at 1:29 PM Makes me think of how the birds land on the apple tree in my backyard and shake the apples off - great contest entry, Kim~ Kim Rodrigues August 20, 2021 at 7:05 PM Thank you, Michelle!

Jan Allison August 17, 2021 at 7:10 AM THANKS FOR THE SMILE kIM:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2021 at 7:19 AM Thank you for s m i l i n g! Makes my day, Jan!

Victor Buhagiar August 17, 2021 at 6:12 AM I can feel the effects of your poems, a hint of humour. Loved it. Hugs. Kim Rodrigues August 17, 2021 at 6:37 AM Thank you, Victor! ~ hugs