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Chorus X 2 To stay rebellious or nihilistic to embrace the devil and face his pierce run from the tempting warmth and drop the flask God’ll surely forgive and wipe off the film because He stands greater, it’s no rivalry. 1. I want to run two abreast with you lord staying well protected behind your sword work naturally beyond rehearsal staying in your presence makes me wiser on loyalty’s lane, be it thick or thin I stay on course to grip the anointing as my life shines the emblem of heaven on it, His faithfulness has been proven to the beast, making it unbearable His consistent fall, getting notable. Chorus To stay rebellious or nihilistic to embrace the devil and face his pierce run from the tempting warmth and drop the flask God’ll surely forgive and wipe off the film because He stands greater, it’s no rivalry. 2. Avoiding the lorgnette to see evil the grain must be kept away from weevil still not far from its cruel passive smoking He means strict business and never joking the stainless steel wok is presentable such a fake gift from hell is laughable but drags the soul to the unseen lava painting white on a deceitful giver. Jesus then redirects me to His lodge to meet all my needs and calm every urge. Chorus To stay rebellious or nihilistic to embrace the devil and face his pierce run from the tempting warmth and drop the flask God’ll surely forgive and wipe off the film because He stands greater, it’s no rivalry. 3. Great pleasures and gifts so cool but snow bound his bent promises just go round and round watering the grass for scorpions to merry he gives you a grape and calls it berry just one compromise brings devastation road so tiled to his discomfort station he puts fire on a beleaguered soul trapping it in a cold and empty bowl the Shepherd appears to step change His lamb His great protection then stays as a clamp. Chorus X 2 To stay rebellious or nihilistic to embrace the devil and face his pierce run from the tempting warmth and drop the flask God’ll surely forgive and wipe off the film because He stands greater, it’s no rivalry.

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Date: 7/17/2017 12:17:00 PM
Excellent if only everyone could read love it
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Alesia
Date: 7/17/2017 6:54:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Ravi
Date: 7/16/2017 8:05:00 AM
I very much appreciated this read my friend Funom. You have done a marvelous job here......Maria
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Maria... Once again, your words flow down like honey
Date: 7/13/2017 10:17:00 AM
A job well done my friend...I bow to your Lyric...^WW^
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:34:00 AM
Thank you so much for your constant encouragement Winged Warrior
Date: 7/12/2017 5:34:00 PM
Excellent write, Funom,
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve
Date: 7/12/2017 3:40:00 PM
A poem of epic proportions filled with lofty ideas and ideals that only a man of deep knowledge could cope with! Excellently written my friend, Furom! I am a deeply religious person not a fanatic though! Bravo!
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:32:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios
Date: 7/12/2017 11:03:00 AM
Your poem evokes a strength and a fierceness in God. Stai bene, amico!
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/19/2017 11:31:00 AM
Thank you so much Ralph
Date: 7/12/2017 9:45:00 AM
Your command of the English language is commendable, Funom! I am not a religious soul, but, that doesn't mean I can't appreciate a grant lyric such as this! Well done, my friend.
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Funom Makama
Date: 7/12/2017 10:51:00 AM
Thank you so much White Wolf... I really do appreciate it.

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