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Oh where could one sweet person go Who craves a phrase to ebb and flow Or meanings' depths as oceans know How could it be, oh could it be ... A world bereft of poetry? Oh how could joyous laughs be heard But naught for play of word-on-word A whimsical wisecrack smilingly slurred How could it be, oh could it be ... A world sans punny poetry? Oh where could loners take their tears Or troubled souls find hopes to pierce The roiling blackness feared and fierce How could it be, oh could it be ... A world without dark poetry? Oh where would lovers hope to chart The grandest coursing of their heart The dreams that bind and tear apart How could it be, oh could it be ... A world with no love poetry? How could the human race e'er find The artful words of heart and mind That poets craft of thought refined Of urge, intent and dream entwined The deep expressions oft' designed To phrase what can't be yet defined Oh ALL the things left blank and blind How could it be, oh could it be ... A world bereft of poetry? Thank heav'n that world ... won't ever be. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "If There Was No Poetry" Poetry Contest, Silent One, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/30/2020 11:35:00 PM
Brilliant...
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Date: 1/28/2020 6:53:00 PM
Connie is right, buddy. A stellar poem. I hope it placed high. I was so happy to see my 5th place with you. My lucky number is 5. Our computers are down so I'm texting wish me luck. I'm not good with cell phone.
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Date: 1/26/2020 1:48:00 PM
OMG this is stellar Greg! You have captured a poet's heart in this marvelous gift of poetry. Congratulations on your deserving First Placement! This is the reason you are known as the Bard! I am faving this sparkling gem! Bravo! xxoo
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Date: 1/26/2020 11:13:00 AM
Congrats G on another great win!
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Date: 1/26/2020 8:36:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top winning poem in S.O. contest, Gregory :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/26/2020 8:23:00 AM
Beautifully written and gloriously rhymed! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/26/2020 7:28:00 AM
A gem, Greg. Oh where, oh where...oh here, I see. Another great verse...of poetry. Congrats on your win. Charlie
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Date: 1/26/2020 5:06:00 AM
Another great poem, I liked the Shakespeare feel to this one... Without poetry, life would be so dull and boring... and full of boring words lol.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 1/23/2020 9:44:00 AM
Another great one G, sure to see this one on top. Glad to know there will never be a world without poetry, we need it to express ourselves!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2020 1:52:00 PM
Indeed, we do, Brother - thank you for stopping by and the wonderful comments, John! Blessings! :o)
Date: 1/23/2020 8:39:00 AM
Well maybe second or third lies ahead for me...lol. Oh Great One, I roll out the red carpet! Aptly spoken with your charm, dear Greg! A fave, of course!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2020 1:52:00 PM
Oh thank you so much, Kim, that's very sweet - I never count on those things. Usually the ones people comment on with expectations end up N/A'd, so I take these comments as my prizes! Blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
Date: 1/23/2020 5:51:00 AM
I loved the sentiments and images expressed so beautifully in this poem, Greg. It flowed so smoothly apart from 'A whimsical wisecrack smilingly slurred' which was presumingly intentional but caught my musical ear off balance! The poem wonderfully portrayed the attributes of poetry and aspirations of its readers and you are always teaching me new vocabulary through your work,Greg! 'Roil' - love it!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 1/25/2020 2:35:00 PM
Yes, on second reading, it fitted perfectly to double-time rhythm and fits in with the fun of the pun theme.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/25/2020 1:49:00 PM
Yes, that was intentional, Wendy, though I gave that a double-time rhythm so it would still fit the tempo, (musician thang, I guess, lol) - thank you for mentioning that! Many blessings to your for the kind words, my friend! :o) <3

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