No Ordinary Angels

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Somber gray clouds float Northwesterly with speed Limbs dance, shiver, rest Her birth like this winter day Poverty, dysfunction reigned No ordinary Angels just humans on earth Adopt this small child Sunlight floods through dark gray clouds Life restored, a better day

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/29/2019 3:09:00 PM

awww, very touching indeed, my friend

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/30/2019 11:31:00 AM

Jack, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate you dropping by. Sara

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 1/29/2019 10:08:00 AM

Optimistic and eye opening. Loved these lines "No ordinary angels just humans on earth adopt this small child" . Superb :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/29/2019 2:16:00 PM

Swetha, Thanks for the visit to my page with uplifting review of my work. Sara

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/26/2019 3:54:00 PM

Love this Sara, the poem is so positive,,

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/26/2019 5:22:00 PM

Harry, Thanks for the visit to my page. Your comments are uplifting. Sara

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/25/2019 2:37:00 PM

Beautiful.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/26/2019 8:41:00 AM

M.L., Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent here. Your comment is uplifting and just what I needed when I read it. Sara