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There you like the tree

- No One Sees You -

(Invisibility)
      In a busy time, we forget to see "the human and beautiful nature"
      forget to breathe ... 
      We follow the "red arrows" ... and "the power of money"
      Live and die of stress and loneliness -
      It doesn't matter if it's day or night -
      No one sees you ...




                              Like dust grains in dumbness
                          Don't be afraid to go into taciturnity
                It will create depth in the relationship with yourself
                       Hush, hush ... listen ... time of harmony
                         Seek and allow for pearls of muteness
                             Some brief moments of stillness
                          Busy people and orchids still breathe
                            Blessed pockets that provide power,
                               strength and muscle relaxation
                     When reusing the colors from the last sunset
                           The eyes of the cube quietly closed
                         No ransom requirement, or red arrows







13/10/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Castellenas Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 3:59 AM
Beautiful photo and amazing description. I liked the inner thoughts and wisdom shared. A outstanding poem.
Andresen Avatar
September 2, 2020 at 5:14 AM
- Many thanks John, for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 10:43 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, Anne -Lise I am not glued to the mobile phone. I never have been because i do not have one. Hugs Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 1, 2020 at 11:34 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile that is right I have not got a cell phone. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 3:29 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, no cell phone. Your welcome. Hugs Darlene
Andresen Avatar
August 31, 2020 at 10:46 AM
... no phone, Darlene ? ... - Many thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Horsman Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 12:20 AM
Thank God, for poets like you Anne-Lise. after reading this, my thoughts were of today and how virtually, everyone walks around with a phone never to witness what is around them. Is this the future?? i wonder.
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 3:55 AM
- We are glued to this mobile phone, Harry ... super glue ... yes, this is the future ... try to put the mobile phone away ... 24 hours ... some had got servere anxiety attacks - Many thanks for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rose  Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 2:42 PM
pearls of muteness , I love that line, It speaks volumes, your poetry flares beauty from every corner, xo
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 3:40 AM
- Many thanks Pixie, for visiting and commenting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 1:06 PM
Hi Sunshine Smile, we don't have time to stop and smell the roses, how ridiculous, life is so short and all we do is try to keep up with it - we should practice as you so correctly say, taciturnity and begin to form a closer to nature attitude within ourselves. Hugs and blessings, Jenny.
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 3:48 AM
- Our mobile phone gets a lot of attention, dear Jenny ... we quickly pass "the people and the orchid" ... no smile ... no hello - Many thanks for visiting and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Warrior Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 8:11 AM
Beautifully written Anne-Lise...enjoyed reading my friend...^WW^ :o)
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 3:39 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and commenting, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Romios Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 7:33 AM
I like your Poetry...it's words and depth. We all have fears...or uneasiness. We just show our fearless sides. We put on our big boy pants and flash our muscles. A great idea...for a poem? Panagiota
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2019 at 3:39 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and commenting, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Wanter Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 5:43 PM
I really love this, Sunshine. I think I'll just fav it! What is the story behind the picture?
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 4:05 AM
- It was a bad title for this poem, Sunlite ... I changed it and wrote a headline :) - Many thanks for visiting, commenting and fave :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 3:32 PM
Peace my friend...live life in peace
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 4:06 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
One Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 3:30 PM
I'm not afraid... Very deep..
Andresen Avatar
October 14, 2019 at 4:07 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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