No One Can Hear Me

I awake, not sure whether I am alive... or dead
I wait, for the smell of the hearth... and baking bread 
But, what greets me is the smell of the privy next to my bed
I am like a ghost.. no one remembers what my last words were
I listen for the clucking of hens
I listen for my goat in her pen
I listen for my little brother, my kin
I do not hear them
I yell, For my mother
For my father
For my sister
But no one can hear me,
Not even the gods
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Situation Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 3:48 AM
A bad dream.
Okubo Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 3:58 PM
Must be a very lonely and scary feeling.Great write.Were you dreaming or dead?
Lea Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 11:12 AM
Its actually based off of a book I read, she has been kidnapped from her homeland and doesn't know where she is.
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