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Do you know I am not dissin' you when I write stuff I call haiku? Soup makes me pick form and sometimes that's only one makes any sense 'tall. Anyhow respect (like, muchly) peops who study and try to perfect. I do things my way. I like that others do things otherly than me. Now, here's the thing... if one of the pos I haikued placed in serious contest, I would doubt what the scene was all about. Yak haiku has place but serious trumps. Some brilliant lines goin' down thanks to the poets.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/19/2011 7:07:00 AM
Finally I see the meaning and reason for Haiku. I had not been able to place it prior to this write. It gets the blood pumpin' Tony
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Date: 11/19/2011 6:25:00 AM
Good to read you today Nancy, like the word play..!
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Date: 11/18/2011 9:29:00 PM
Im stickin' with Ghetto Style haiku, seems to work for me, takes the stress of tryin' to comply to rules, place or not..MEH!.......nice write Nancy xx
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Date: 11/18/2011 9:25:00 PM
Okay, now why didn't I just say THAT? ;-) For a dynamo, ya got a soft touch! Nicely done, nice thoughts... just nice. Smiles and thumbs up, Cyndi
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Date: 11/18/2011 8:31:00 PM
caint hack no hakin haiku here, don't have a clue, im sukin beer, cant chew on dem haiku, upchuck comin , bloody spew, sometime...
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Date: 11/18/2011 8:21:00 PM
Carefree flowin haiku's Mrs. Nancy, seriously :)
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