No More Next Times

The whole house was dim
Only the oven flames burning
We couldn't find you
Our blood began  churning

We scoured each room
Our heartbeats are yelling
To find you alone
Deranged and  repelling

You stink of poison 
It seeps through your skin
An odor so potent 
So easy to pin

I smell the resin
Of two day old sweat
Your eyes somehow open
With no signs of regret

A vision of a junkie
No more and no less
To weak to confront it
Just claim duress

Your cheeks sunken deeply
Thinned to the bone
Straggly haired
A look made of stone

Lips dried to crust
Feverishly dehydrated
Spoke like a child
Eyes blank and dilated

The sirens grew closer 
You resisted the aid
I promised you solace
But you can’t be afraid

A few hours later
You were awake
I begged of you
To know what’s at stake

You created two angels 
That will surely turn sour
Blame it all on yourself
Its their souls you’ll devour

When the urges arise 
Remember the day 
We found you alone 
JUST A HEARTBEAT AWAY
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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May 28, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Eryka, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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December 22, 2009 at 11:54 AM
Congratulations on being a first round survivor and the best to you in the finals Eryka. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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December 21, 2009 at 10:42 PM
Dear Eryka, Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on advancing to the finals. Lainie
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December 21, 2009 at 1:04 PM
Congrats. on your first round with this poem, Eryka, Sincerely, Love, Moses
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December 21, 2009 at 8:52 AM
Congrats on your poem winning the first round of PS contest!! Very well deserved, enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry. Here’s wishing you a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!! May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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December 20, 2009 at 10:06 AM
Many congratulations on reaching the second round with your fine poem >> James
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December 15, 2009 at 5:17 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Eryka! Peace and love, Audrey
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December 15, 2009 at 12:34 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured on the Soup this week >> James
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December 15, 2009 at 10:25 AM
congrads, and this piece grabed me with the truth i read with excitment and looked for the punishment at the end. but it was missing. what happen to the no more next time? it was a great piece but it left me wanting. John h loving iii
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December 15, 2009 at 2:15 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. A well deserving honor. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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December 14, 2009 at 6:10 PM
A reminder of the cost of addiction. Good use of imagery to make your point. Congratulations on having your poem featured. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen
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December 14, 2009 at 4:04 PM
Perfect description of the heartbreak of addiction ... and, if this was true I surely hope everyone can get help!! Very brave write her and an excellent selection to be a feature this week at the Soup! Congratulations! Hope you have a good holiday and that 2010 is a blessed year for your and yours!!
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December 14, 2009 at 11:19 AM
Eryka - many congrats on being featured this week. Rgds Janette
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 8:23 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured at PoetrySoup this week Eryka. May you have many more features. Love,Carol
Brown Avatar
December 14, 2009 at 5:08 AM
congrats on being featured this week
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June 23, 2009 at 5:42 PM
Very good rhyming and story flow, Eryka, good luck, love to you
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