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No More Mr Grumpy

The boiler man is due to call I’m hoping its Peter or Paul - Not Fred, he’s a numpty He’s nasty and grumpy His moaning drives me up the wall! FICTION POEM 9/1/19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Horne Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 9:02 AM
LOL, had a chuckle at this
Faulkner Avatar
September 20, 2019 at 2:17 PM
Hah, that's a tongue-in-cheek one for sure, Jan!
Adams Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 11:12 PM
Good one, and the pic is perfect!....pat
La France Avatar
September 4, 2019 at 11:25 AM
Jan, oh this is delightful !
Laurie Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 9:13 PM
G'day Jan … as so many do Jan. You better tell Fred to get off the grumpy pills - thanks Jan - Lindsay
Callus Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 9:49 AM
Alright...it is fiction, still I'm glad you did not include me as being grumpy :) As always, your Limerick comes with a smile attached :) Hugs // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 4:21 PM
Sounds kind of like Humpty Dumpty!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations, Jan!
Hopper Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 2:29 PM
Cute!!
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 1:57 PM
- I hope it's Patrick who will come ... his moaning is worth the wall :))) ... fiction :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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