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The boiler man is due to call I’m hoping its Peter or Paul - Not Fred, he’s a numpty He’s nasty and grumpy His moaning drives me up the wall! FICTION POEM 9/1/19

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Date: 9/27/2019 9:02:00 AM
LOL, had a chuckle at this
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Date: 9/20/2019 2:17:00 PM
Hah, that's a tongue-in-cheek one for sure, Jan!
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Date: 9/5/2019 11:12:00 PM
Good one, and the pic is perfect!....pat
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Date: 9/4/2019 11:25:00 AM
Jan, oh this is delightful !
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Date: 9/2/2019 9:13:00 PM
G'day Jan … as so many do Jan. You better tell Fred to get off the grumpy pills - thanks Jan - Lindsay
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Date: 9/2/2019 9:49:00 AM
Alright...it is fiction, still I'm glad you did not include me as being grumpy :) As always, your Limerick comes with a smile attached :) Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/1/2019 4:21:00 PM
Sounds kind of like Humpty Dumpty!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/2/2019 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations, Jan!
Date: 9/1/2019 2:29:00 PM
Cute!!
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Date: 9/1/2019 1:57:00 PM
- I hope it's Patrick who will come ... his moaning is worth the wall :))) ... fiction :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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