Robert Pettit Poet Chastushka

No More Greasy Kid Stuff

Don’t give me more of that greasy kid stuff.
It won’t make my hair stay down.
Instead of smooth, it makes me look rough.
I don’t want to go looking like a clown.

My first try at this type of poetic expression.
For Rick's latest contest

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Caryl Muzzey January 20, 2011 at 10:22 AM A great write! I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest with this one, it should do well. Caryl

Francine Roberts January 10, 2011 at 6:21 PM good one Robert, a new form for me as well but I am game to try it too, good luck in the contest

Wilma Neels January 10, 2011 at 6:08 PM Oh the joys of trying the gel and spray Robert.. You reminded me of my godson who is eight.. He insist on using gel every day.. All the best for the contest ;-) WN