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No More Goodbye Tears

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For Steve with Love
your feel
still comes
to me
when I 
recall
our love
filled years

our shared
passion
goes on
inside
my heart
though gone
are tears

decades
went by
while I
cried ‘why
did you
so choose
to die’

I know
in time
we will
unite
where love
feels no
good-bye

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Terry Miller

Date: 9/14/2025 4:20:00 PM

Oh, you managed such passion in such a rigid structure, I am in awe, congratulations

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/14/2025 2:36:00 PM

I should have gone with emotion like you did. Mist of the topped placed are either emotive or very clever. Congratulations

Charles Messina

Date: 9/13/2025 11:33:00 AM

CayCay, this sad yet beautiful poem touched me. One day you will meet again "where love feels no good-bye" Congratulations on your top win! Hugs Charlie

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/13/2025 12:31:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie, for sponsoring. Your contest are always interesting challenges to pen and I appreciate the time you put into them for us. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/31/2025 7:55:00 PM

Love how that last stanza converts potential maudlin melancholy into hope and strength. Kudos, Gershon

Paige Hind

Date: 8/30/2025 7:31:00 PM

A beautiful poem - so sweetly sad

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2025 7:46:00 PM

Wow, an amazing job with this one. It's kind of a cool form. Limiting and yet pretty interesting to write with. You came up with a nice emotional theme

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/28/2025 6:46:00 PM

One day you will be united again, and it will be pure bliss by then :)

I Am Anaya

Date: 8/28/2025 2:31:00 PM

I can't imagine losing my best freind, God forbid as they say. Then I reread and see a story of no goodbyes and only that of eternal love. Great job 2,7,4 looks difficult, you made it look easy, CC. GL with this already winner! xhugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/28/2025 7:41:00 AM

- Love the last verse here, CayCay :) - Lots of emotion - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/28/2025 2:08:00 AM

CayCay, you're a marvel. Not an easy contest. I wouldn't dare try it. Best for a win.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/28/2025 5:48:00 AM

You called me a marvel - I don't think anyone has ever called me that before. Thank you, thank you very much, so sweet. Always good to see you, Victor. Have the best possible day. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/27/2025 6:04:00 PM

an engaging write, CayCay. I found your words filled with a level of hope, even though love lingers long past death and grief. Beautiful...faving,

CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/28/2025 5:47:00 AM

It means a great deal to me that you faved this. Thank you, Sara. I wrote it thinking of my 1st husband whom I lost so it has matter and meaning to me, as well. I appreciate you. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Tom Woody

Date: 8/27/2025 5:27:00 AM

Yeah! At that time this verse will apply: Revelation 21:4. No more tears, sorrow or death. Nice write Cay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 8/27/2025 5:36:00 AM

Thank you, Tom. I want you to know just so you'll know, not because it bothers me, because it doesn't, that if we were in the same place and you said, 'Cay', I probably wouldn't notice. See, you did need to know that, right? Just in case Soup throws a party some day and you want my attention. Always a pleasure to receive your comments - LOVE this one. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

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