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All those times you told me Every word you ever said to me It was a lie Trying to mistify My mind just to make me hurt Make me feel like dirt Putting all I can into a fake man You say I was nothing Well what was I then Just a toy For a little boy That can't be counted on Well you're a pretty good con You tricked me You're a little boy a man never to be

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/10/2010 2:35:00 PM
Interesting thoughts that you have penned..There is the little boy inside of every man and as there is the little girl inside of every woman..Great conveyance of the idea..Sara
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:40:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your impressive poetry today Amber. Have not read for almost a week now. I had a wonderful vacation. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:29:00 AM
Awesome write !
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Date: 9/8/2010 6:36:00 PM
Awesome, Amber. Telling it like it is. Calling a spade a spade. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 9/8/2010 6:26:00 PM
I like the venom in this write, your emotions are prevalent in this vivid write. Enjoyed the read.
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