No Longer There

EVERY MORNING WHEN WE WAKE UP WE SEE YOUR FAVOURITE CHAIR, IT BREAKS OUR HEARTS TO REALISE YOUR NO LONGER THERE.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/27/2023 7:42:00 AM

Sad one. Grief is hard but it does get better as time goes on and with the realization that the person has gone on to a place of awesome beauty. Thanks for sharing, Sara

Simon Hamill
Date: 7/27/2023 6:05:00 PM

Hi Sara. Thank you, I really like to think he's gone to a better place. Take care. Simon

Jan Allison

Date: 7/23/2023 4:55:00 AM

aww Simon , such a heartbreaking scenario and one we can all relate to, when dad died I did a poem called empty chair, so sorry for your loss:-( hugs jan xx

Simon Hamill
Date: 7/23/2023 5:34:00 PM

Hi Jan, thank you, family and friends were so used to seeing him sat in his chair. Take care, Simon:-)

Deb M

Date: 7/20/2023 3:26:00 PM

Oh my Simon…..so few words but such a poignant mighty meaning! Your words touched my heart so deeply and resonated with me! Sorry for your loss Simon! Debx

Simon Hamill
Date: 7/23/2023 5:30:00 PM

Hi Deb,thank you, it has been a very difficult few months for my wife and I. Take care,simon