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Stepping stones covered with moss Across the little stream they went to their spot beside the tree that resembles an inverted pom-pom Streamers looking like green elongated feathers Weeping willow, crying joyous tears Mint and ivory comforter spread out atop lush grass A tisket a tasket, inside the green and yellow basket... fresh cucumbers, celery, bell peppers, creamy guacamole, sweet honeydew wedges, limeade to wash it all down Hours went by...they grazed and gazed into each others eyes The bayou heat created a green haze around them Tired now, they laid on their backs and smiled at the same sky Emerald heart shaped thought bubbles appeared over their heads Few words needed to be exchanged, just being together, was enough No greener pastures needed 3/1/16

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Date: 3/14/2016 10:56:00 PM
Hi Dineen, Congratulations on your Greenish win. Love LINDA
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/19/2016 6:29:00 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you very much for the congrats!
Date: 3/3/2016 9:03:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Dineen. Elaine
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/9/2016 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much Elaine!
Date: 3/3/2016 6:19:00 AM
I would love to go on a picnic like that! I think that you have captured the bucolic scene very well. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/3/2016 7:32:00 AM
I'm glad that picnic was inviting Matthew. Quite a kind comment, thank you.
Date: 3/2/2016 10:14:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Dineen
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/3/2016 7:29:00 AM
I appreciate that Joseph, thank you.
Date: 3/2/2016 8:12:00 PM
Hi Dineen, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/3/2016 7:26:00 AM
Hello Vlad, thank you for the congrats!
Date: 3/2/2016 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Well written metaphors.
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Dineen Williams Gault
Date: 3/3/2016 7:25:00 AM
Glad you liked the metaphors Janis, thank you!

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