No Greener

Stepping stones covered with moss
Across the little stream they went to their spot
beside the tree that resembles an inverted pom-pom
Streamers looking like green elongated feathers
Weeping willow, crying joyous tears
Mint and ivory comforter spread out atop lush grass
A tisket a tasket, inside the green and yellow basket...
fresh cucumbers, celery, bell peppers, creamy guacamole, 
sweet honeydew wedges, limeade to wash it all down
Hours went by...they grazed and gazed into each others eyes
The bayou heat created a green haze around them
Tired now, they laid on their backs and smiled at the same sky
Emerald heart shaped thought bubbles appeared over their heads
Few words needed to be exchanged, just being together, was enough
No greener pastures needed


3/1/16
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:56 PM
Hi Dineen, Congratulations on your Greenish win. Love LINDA
Williams Gault Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 6:29 AM
Hi Linda. Thank you very much for the congrats!
George   Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 9:03 AM
Many congrats on your win, Dineen. Elaine
Williams Gault Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Thank you so much Elaine!
Anish Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 6:19 AM
I would love to go on a picnic like that! I think that you have captured the bucolic scene very well. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Williams Gault Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 7:32 AM
I'm glad that picnic was inviting Matthew. Quite a kind comment, thank you.
May Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 10:14 PM
Congrats on a fine win Dineen
Williams Gault Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 7:29 AM
I appreciate that Joseph, thank you.
Raven Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 8:12 PM
Hi Dineen, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
Williams Gault Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 7:26 AM
Hello Vlad, thank you for the congrats!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
March 2, 2016 at 7:14 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Well written metaphors.
Williams Gault Avatar
March 3, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Glad you liked the metaphors Janis, thank you!
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