No Foul

My dream, my desire
is one with a naughty theme...

four women and me
engaged in some sweaty fun - 
dribbling, scoring.......basketball.



For "Tanka me a Dream" contest sponsored by Michael J. Falotico.

by George Aul
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 12:03 PM
Sounds like a plan George and a very interesting dream too luv.. good luck in the contest with this imaginative entry which I just know Michael will luv being a sports enthusiast..haha..
Poet Avatar
February 13, 2011 at 7:19 AM
Very witty write George!Love it---kashinath
Dietrich Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 11:11 PM
hahaha, Good one, George! Maybe they are naked? heehee
Pettit Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 4:22 PM
Nice dream, and you have described it well in this tanka.
Haick Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 1:52 PM
LOL! Best of luck in Michael's Contest, George. Always, Annalise
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