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No Fair Fer Shure

Poor ol' boy Richard Odekirk,
Just couldn't get fired and hasta work.
It's unfair that he'll miss the enjoyment,
Of his 96 weeks of Unemployment!

Just for Caties contest!!!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

February 23, 2011 at 6:18 AM

Congratulations on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "You Who...Yo, Cherihew". A well deserved win William. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 14, 2011 at 6:15 PM

Congratulations on nthe well deserved win in the contest, William

Deb Radke

February 14, 2011 at 1:06 PM

This is very good. Cleverly said and well written. Congratulations on your winning placement. Well deserved. Best wishes. Deb

Sidney Beck

February 13, 2011 at 9:01 AM

Well done ! you have gained a much-deserved win in this contest….best wishes….Syd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 11, 2011 at 7:26 AM

Congrats Will on your first place win in Catie's contest my friend.. enjoy with luv..

Kash Poet

February 9, 2011 at 10:42 PM

Wonderful Clerihew !Congrats on your 1st place win!---kashinath

Harry Horsman

February 9, 2011 at 7:55 PM

excellent William, deserved winner, enjoyed. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

February 9, 2011 at 7:26 PM

oh, I remember this one. HOw cool that you got top place! congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi

February 9, 2011 at 5:11 PM

wow fantastic! GREAT win Light & Love

Robert Pettit

February 9, 2011 at 4:06 PM

Funny and descriptive. No wonder you won first place in Catie's contest. Congratulations!

Robert A. Dufresne

February 9, 2011 at 3:44 PM

congratulations to you William on your fine poem for first place win

Francine Roberts

February 9, 2011 at 12:44 PM

congrats on your first place win in Caties contest!

Sara Kendrick

February 9, 2011 at 11:48 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards

February 9, 2011 at 11:42 AM

Hooray for you!! Number one and so funny!! Congratulations!

Kory Calhoun

February 9, 2011 at 11:08 AM

Ain't that the TRUTH! LOL! Congratulations on your 1st Place WIN in Catie's contest. Best wishes, KC

Carolyn Devonshire

February 9, 2011 at 10:00 AM

First place for a top-notch poem, William. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 6, 2011 at 1:44 PM

Quite humorous and witty write on Richard odekirk, William

Sara Kendrick

February 6, 2011 at 4:04 AM

Enjoyed the humor..Got a chuckle..He must be an excellent worker or the employer desperate...Good luck in the contest..Hoping that today is bringing you better health..Your kind review of my work was much appreciated..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

February 6, 2011 at 12:08 AM

hahaha, I don't even know who this guy is, I thought maybe a famous guy, but I googled someone just an ordinary guy i saw. This is really funny. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

February 5, 2011 at 6:56 PM

Nice humor and funny expressions, William

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 5, 2011 at 6:33 PM

Cool one Will and good luck in the contest.. awesome muse u chose to do your Clerihew .. great lines of expression my friend.. good luck int he contest..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

February 5, 2011 at 6:18 PM

Yikes, with 96 weeks of unemployment, it's understandable why Richard wanted to get fired. Very funny, William! Wishing you luck in Catie's contest. She's had some very entertaining entries and yours is certainly up there. Again, it's nice to see you here on the Soup. Love, Carolyn

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