Jeremy Smith Poet Rhyme

No Escape

The thoughts in my head driving me mad
I didn't want to go bad
Cant help but to be sad
No need for a dad who was just as bad

I need a way out without having to shout or pout
No where to hideout
Just want to blackout
Maybe then I can find a way to breakout
Until then I remain in a shadow of doubt

The pressure continues to build
Life unfulfilled time begins to still
While I was unwilled
No way to rebuild

Can no longer handle the torment
Tired of living in discontent
Never gave consent with intent
I was unable to prevent
Now there's nothing left but to repent

3/13/2017

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Doug Vinson March 16, 2017 at 2:25 PM How much control do we have over our own life?

John Hamilton March 15, 2017 at 11:50 AM Nice rhyme Jeremy, the best rhymes don't repeat words, so try to use different words to add variety (eg bad, bad) typo unwiled? Keep trying, I like the line separation better than paragraph form.

Darlene De Beaulieu March 13, 2017 at 12:23 PM Yes Jeremy I feel your frustration in your poem.You feel trapped ,I sense that to. It is a deep poem.

Charmaine Chircop March 13, 2017 at 11:28 AM I can feel the frustration of someone feeling trapped with no way out°?Indeed with no escape...Deep poem indeed.