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No Escape

The thoughts in my head driving me mad I didn't want to go bad Cant help but to be sad No need for a dad who was just as bad
I need a way out without having to shout or pout No where to hideout Just want to blackout Maybe then I can find a way to breakout Until then I remain in a shadow of doubt
The pressure continues to build Life unfulfilled time begins to still While I was unwilled No way to rebuild
Can no longer handle the torment Tired of living in discontent Never gave consent with intent I was unable to prevent Now there's nothing left but to repent
3/13/2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/16/2017 2:25:00 PM
How much control do we have over our own life?
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Date: 3/15/2017 11:50:00 AM
Nice rhyme Jeremy, the best rhymes don't repeat words, so try to use different words to add variety (eg bad, bad) typo unwiled? Keep trying, I like the line separation better than paragraph form.
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Date: 3/13/2017 12:23:00 PM
Yes Jeremy I feel your frustration in your poem.You feel trapped ,I sense that to. It is a deep poem.
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Date: 3/13/2017 11:28:00 AM
I can feel the frustration of someone feeling trapped with no way out°?Indeed with no escape...Deep poem indeed.
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