No Dryer Yet

Yes, we had a washer, but no dryer yet
So we hung our clothes out on the line to dry
with those old wooden clothes pins, you know  
and after dinner we retired to the balcony
to sit and sip tea, often with neighbors

who dropped by to catch up on the local gossip...
Those nights seemed to go on and on, at least 
until my bedtime, 9:30 p.m. -- so unfair! -- at
which point the 'adult talk' commenced, an
occasional burst of laughter punctuating the air...

Seems nobody's got time for each other on 
our old block these days -- the balconies sure are 
empty at night -- or else perhaps folks just got
so busy with their new-fangled dryers, flat-screen
TVs, smartphones and whatnot

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 2/13/2020 1:56:00 PM
Wow, clotheslines...some idiot here decided they should be made illegal a few years back. I our family, we'd sit out back and drink iced tea.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/13/2020 9:15:00 PM
Clotheslines illegal; gambling, hard-core porn, and recreational marijuana all legal. Sounds logical, I guess. Hmmm. Sam the Skeptic
Date: 2/12/2020 3:26:00 PM
So true Gershon, life these days moves at such a fast pace nobody has time to enjoy the company of others. There's no community spirit anymore. A great write, you painted a wonderful picture. Best...Ron
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/12/2020 6:54:00 PM
That's it, Ron; you've nailed the problem -- no community spirit, and (I'd add) no spirit of community! At least there's Poetry Soup, where we communicate great! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 2/12/2020 2:07:00 PM
Like you, I remember the days when my mother hung clothes outside to dry. She refused to use a dryer and said clothes smelled better after drying outdoors. Funny how the technology revolution has left some of us, including me, behind. Can't use a smart phone yet. Enjoyed your poem, Gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/12/2020 2:24:00 PM
Ha, ha. You're ahead of me. At least you seem interested in using a smart phone... Thanks for your kind words, Carolyn. Warm wishes, Gershon
Date: 2/12/2020 9:16:00 AM
Hi Gershon, Those days are long gone. These days neighbors won’t even greet you. Good write. Well done:-) Alexis
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/12/2020 9:42:00 AM
I guess that today one should be grateful if his neighbors aren't mugging him! Thanks, Alexis! :) Gershon
Date: 2/11/2020 11:27:00 PM
You will not get the same water you saw in a river a minute before.. Life is flowing.. New entertainments coming.. nostalgic over the old.. Good write..
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/12/2020 9:41:00 AM
You're correct, but why cast away nice, generations-old traditions in the name of a questionable modernity? ~ Gershon
Date: 2/11/2020 10:44:00 PM
The smell of sheets dried on the line is one of life’s small gifts. Thank you for the reminder :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/12/2020 9:39:00 AM
Nothing like the fresh smell of clothes off the line, esp. on a warm, sunny day! Sunshine and lollipops, Gershon
Date: 2/11/2020 8:17:00 PM
I grew up in an apartment building so no porches there. However, we did socialize with our neighbors as her kid & I played out front and playing cops & criminals in the large area out back.
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Jean Bush
Date: 2/20/2020 1:48:00 PM
Dang you, Gershon! I couldn't think of the word robbers. Getting too dam old. Thanks for reminding me.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2020 8:47:00 PM
Cops and criminals? Not cops and robbers?... At least you weren't playing 'Off the honky pig!' Ha, ha. Just kidding. Jean, can't thank you enough for all of your support and your great comments. Deeply appreciated. Thanks, gw
Date: 2/11/2020 7:57:00 PM
Reminded me of my growing youth when the adults mingled drinking their favorite drinks as we try to sleep. Nice scene, Gershon, you brought memories. Now I feel everyone are to busy with their own lives to socialize.. I don't know, I do have a few police officers that live behind me on the other block and they love to get loud. especially when the football games are going on.
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Date: 2/11/2020 8:50:00 PM
Yeah, you're right, Eve! Police officers, firefighters still get together, although not for tea, as you've noted. Thanks for the in-depth comment! ~ Here's to tea! :) Gershon
Date: 2/11/2020 6:37:00 PM
i still use those old wooden clothes pins on the clothes line in our country place, gershon! i love this poem - it brings back those days very clearly and with all the warmth such memories evoke. people today are missing out...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2020 8:33:00 PM
Well, when people today don't know what they're missing, then it's not so bad, I suppose. I think the loss of Time is the biggest loss of all. Where did it go? Thanks, Ilene. :) Gershon
Date: 2/11/2020 5:22:00 PM
So many things in life are changing and I'm not sure for the better. Man I miss those wooden clothes pins.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/11/2020 8:28:00 PM
Hey, Chris! Look upwards one comment: Ilene Bauer is still using them! … And I've seen wooden clothes pins in some doozies of sculptures too! Keep the Faith. LOL. Thanks, Gershon
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