Michael J. Falotico Poet Light Verse

"no Dream"

Lying in bed this morning watching the ceiling fan spin...
Wonderful dreams of the night, I'm so much loving..
The images so clear from the soft kiss from your lips..
Your waist in my hands like candy to my finger tips...
The salty taste of your sweat from your neck is so real..
My door starts to open as things are so surreal...
And there you stood in my doorway wearing that purple
robe open so slightly..
You kneel on the bed as you grab me so tightly...
No dream at all as we recreate the night..
Then we hold each other so close and I turn off the light..

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Deepanshi Chaudhry June 4, 2010 at 10:29 AM A brilliantly passionate and seductive poem! Good work!

Carol Sunshine Brown June 4, 2010 at 6:31 AM This is a great way to start my morning reading poetry. I am glad your poetry was among the poetry I have the pleasure to read today. Wishing you a weekend full of love and inspiration Michael. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich June 3, 2010 at 2:46 PM Ooh, la la, your response to the chocolate cheesecake is now very understandable! ON that same note, my reply to you is, "no I prefer to keep work and pleasure separate" hahaha (what do you expect after 35 yrs. marriage?) ANywho, this is a great little poem!! LUv, andrea

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 3, 2010 at 12:06 PM Such sweet words Michael and a joy to read ... such a creative write too and so enjoyed .. as always .. a poem from Mike feels so right.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Wilma Neels June 3, 2010 at 10:12 AM Wow, I love the visuals you create with your words.. Its like peeping through a window and being part of that moment ~ rgds WN

Joyce Johnson June 3, 2010 at 9:52 AM A beautiful love tale. LThank you for your kind comments . Love, Joyce

Sarah Hales June 3, 2010 at 9:43 AM Wow i could imagin all of that very real loved it ,,my type of writing ... sarah x

Amy Green June 3, 2010 at 8:29 AM Reminds me of a song by Jeff Buckley. Very well done!

Carolyn Devonshire June 3, 2010 at 8:12 AM There is no need to dream when you have such passion in your life, Michael. You are quite a romantic man and any woman would be lucky to have someone who can express his feelings this way. Beautiful poem! Love, Carolyn

Skat A June 3, 2010 at 8:03 AM WOW! surreal mums the word. Enjoyed your reality dream.-IRMA