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is it selfish to want to hang on to you to keep you bound to this realm and not set you free is it wrong to hold on with all my might to the life of you as you fade away little by little with every breath AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on February 22, 2021

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Date: 2/23/2021 12:28:00 PM
Hi Line! Long time it has been. I love this one because I understand -- to want just one more moment with my beloved, and not be able have it, but one thing I can tell you, you can stretch the good moments into forever in your heart and it will comfort you. Andrew Fairchild
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Date: 2/23/2021 3:37:00 PM
Absolutely, Andrew. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment ~
Date: 2/23/2021 7:49:00 AM
Just breathe.
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Date: 2/23/2021 9:01:00 AM
Thanks, DM ~
Date: 2/23/2021 7:48:00 AM
More than moving Line. A painful moment beautifully expressed. Linda
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Date: 2/23/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thank you very much, Linda ~
Date: 2/22/2021 8:10:00 PM
This one tears my insides out. Beyond poignant. Tears of Pain and Joy, Gershon
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Date: 2/22/2021 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon ~

Book: Shattered Sighs