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Listen to poem:
is it selfish
to want
to hang on to you
to keep you 
bound to this realm
and not set you free
is it wrong
to hold on
with all my might
to the life of you
as you fade away
little by little
with every breath



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Posted on February 22, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 2/23/2021 12:28:00 PM
Hi Line! Long time it has been. I love this one because I understand -- to want just one more moment with my beloved, and not be able have it, but one thing I can tell you, you can stretch the good moments into forever in your heart and it will comfort you. Andrew Fairchild
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/23/2021 3:37:00 PM
Absolutely, Andrew. Thanks for your lovely visit and comment ~
Date: 2/23/2021 7:49:00 AM
Just breathe.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 2/23/2021 9:01:00 AM
Thanks, DM ~
Date: 2/23/2021 7:48:00 AM
More than moving Line. A painful moment beautifully expressed. Linda
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Date: 2/23/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thank you very much, Linda ~
Date: 2/22/2021 8:10:00 PM
This one tears my insides out. Beyond poignant. Tears of Pain and Joy, Gershon
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Date: 2/22/2021 8:26:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon ~
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