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The poem was on bravery Glory of undefeated King and his artillery Lone Courtman was attacked by King's military The poem praised Kings benevolent nature King loved poor Courtman's daughter Courtman killed, King forcibly married daughter later Poem was full of poor imagery Bravery was actually brutality Benevolence was selfish cruelty Viewed cause it was Entry in Contest Skipped Comment as it was Childs creative best Negative Comment could have nipped the budding Poet ( Entry in Members Contest - Comment versus View by HGarvey Daniel Esquire )

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Date: 12/13/2010 7:22:00 AM
Hey, this is really a cool writing about this child's poem. I just loved your last sentence,"could have nipped the budding poet" Wonderful! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 10/28/2010 9:18:00 AM
@Dane - Thnx for nice comments & wishes for contest
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:30:00 AM
Encouragement...a great way to teach! Enjoyed your poem. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 10/16/2010 12:37:00 PM
@Destroyer @Deb @ Catie - thnx for nyc comments & gud wishes 4 contest.... Luv/Best wishes always.................
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Date: 10/16/2010 12:22:00 PM
a good entry for the contest, good luck, enjoyed...P.D.
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Date: 10/16/2010 12:14:00 PM
it's true that children need encouragement no matter what their endeavor..good poem of luck..Take care~Deb
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