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Ask me not why
this soul prefers me most

For I, the soul most know,
favor the locked lass
with;
gold

Yet this day,
before me;
the stroll long her back down
was black

The sylph’s eyes,
pitch;
just as black...

...her figure to I
was;
just as blond

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/29/2012 8:59:00 PM
invoking write here james, wonderful style
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Date: 1/20/2012 8:57:00 AM
A unique write on this poem James. Much thought put into this one. I had to read it a couple of times . love phyl
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Date: 1/14/2012 11:20:00 PM
Jimmy....first....thank you for your comments....a trusted friend....2nd... your free association so prevalent in this fine write makes me smile! jimbo
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Date: 1/13/2012 8:04:00 PM
nice to see your page alive ang kicking, james.. enjoyed the study in contrast here: blonde, slyph/ gold , black... the use of words really give a nice accent to the piece... blessings and hugggs! :)
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Date: 1/10/2012 7:25:00 PM
Thy soul prefers thee with good reason dear poet. And I am fascinated with the contrasting of souls and blending of color in this subtle rhyme. I've been fevered with the flu beast this past while - hope you are well. Luv, Lizzy
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Date: 1/10/2012 4:51:00 PM
I get a study in contrasts. Forgive me, dear sir, but I have read this many times, and for good reason. Your poetry is infectious, contagious and wonderfully original. Love, daver
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Date: 1/10/2012 11:56:00 AM
this was really breathtaking in all the ways...black or white ..beauty seen through the purest eyes,,,cheers !!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 1/9/2012 3:46:00 PM
dude, black is beauyful! T. S.
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Date: 1/10/2012 11:17:00 AM
....black is only one color....imagine how dull it would be to gaze at this color all day; lol...hence; God created white....I mean, light ! *smiles* Trust me; lots-O-love here !
Date: 1/8/2012 6:52:00 PM
explosive words so creative James.. luv the flow and energy as well as images.. would u enter Tracie's contest with me ?? it will be fun.. my hand is minus two fingers due to nerve damage..my right hand..oh..much therapy needed.. and prayers too.. hope u say yes.. but I know u usually don't enter contests but we both would have to for the collab...
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Date: 1/8/2012 1:16:00 PM
A nice write :-)
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