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You can’t teach poetry pro forma it’s the effort of a fool You can’t gain sagacity from a book or by the golden rule You can’t be what you haven’t lived the safety net misleads You can’t bleed with another’s blood transfused each phrase deceives The dance floor or the balcony true seekers get to choose And write those words their pain has forged —that dilettantes misuse (Dreamsleep: April, 2023)

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Date: 4/8/2023 11:20:00 AM
I agree. Though you put it out there, folks are going to use it. That doesn't make it right but that's just how it is. Used until it becomes cliche'. Whether they have lived it or not. I like this one, Kurt.
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Kurt Philip Behm
Date: 4/8/2023 11:38:00 AM
Thanks, like Dorothy in The Wizard Of Oz, the enlightened uyltimately know.

Book: Shattered Sighs