No Big Deal

No big deal






Lot of time bushed in the washroom,
His mind was stuck in colonic loops,
Painfully shy was the young groom,
What big deal when everyone poops !





Written July 28th, 2015
For contest by Roy Jerden
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 11:36 AM
This is what I call "serious wit", Upma! A very unique take on this topic. ~ Congratulations on your fine win! All the best. // paul
A  Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 11:55 AM
Dr Upma, Congrats on your win. Another interesting contest. LOVE SKAT
Wigley Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 7:50 AM
Nicely done, Dr Upma, much enjoyed. Congrats, Viv x
Torres Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 8:00 PM
Excellent write !! No wonder I'm your biggest fan ever since.. Wish you luck in the contest !! ^_^
Rotman Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 7:44 PM
I'm becoming a fan! However did you think to use a groom, lol.
Muideen Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 3:50 PM
What a fabulous write here, I love your write it so funny. ..........7......A.M.
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 3:48 PM
haha. You are getting in on the act too I see!!! Nicely done!
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