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No Anchor for Rancor ~ Sponsor: Unseeking Seeker

August 4, 2023____________________________ 

No Anchor For Rancour

Upon those who yield to anger, I should take pity
because words they spit are like sandpaper, gritty.
A loathsome temper causes them to fume and fret,
sometimes churlish ones spew what they will regret.

Restraining venom is an idea some are unable to grok.
Fury is the key to a door they have no right to unlock,
for they seek revenge when it is not theirs to take.
Hissing like the demon who was disguised as a snake.

It's amazing to what lengths their bitterness will go.
Look into their eyes and you'll see their malice grow.
A hostile fire-breathing dragon is an ignorant beast
who will spend all its time eating outrage at a feast.

They wear the weight of vitriol like a boa of albatross
when it should be thrown away. In the sea given a toss.
A temper makes foolish ones lose all sense of reason.
They may even betray themselves in an act of treason.

Rancour can be an anchor that drowns them in the sea
if they cannot cut the chain that would set them free.
It's evil to prick as a sharp thorn in someone else's side.
Irascible people are those most nice folks cannot abide.

If they continue to blow on smoldering embers of a fire
they will be burned by the contentiousness of their ire.
They should douse all glowing cinders within their soul,
to loosen shackles of angst and keep anger under control.
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Saber Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 2:07 AM
I liked that, insightful and with power.
Lane Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Thank you, Simon.
Koplin Avatar
August 19, 2023 at 7:39 PM
Wow, very powerful piece Lin! Congratulations on your Potd!!
Lane Avatar
October 3, 2023 at 7:23 AM
Thanks, Mark. Sorry for the delay in responding.
Bowring Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 1:41 PM
An amazing poem Lin. So well written- particularly love the last stanza. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
Lane Avatar
August 17, 2023 at 2:48 AM
Thank you for your generous comments, Christina.
Toney Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 6:12 PM
"Rancour can be an anchor that drowns them in the sea if they cannot cut the chain that would set them free." So true, and history is full of examples. Congratulations, Lin, on your podium finish and POTD!
Lane Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Hi Mark and thanks ever so much for your thoughtful review.
Canerdy Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 12:44 PM
Excellent poem well-deserving of the win, Lin~~vividly descriptive of the power of rancor. Janice
Lane Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Thanks so much for your kind comments, Janice.
Poet Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Back with hearty congratulations on your well-deserved win with this outstanding poem, Lin. With my very best wishes to you.
Lane Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Thank you very much, Lasaad. Your remarks are valued.
Kauffman Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 9:59 AM
Lin, what line do I chose to highlight? Each shines as brightly as a morning star! Your words create a stunning picture of rancor that "smolders." An honor to share the podium with you! Congratulations. Blessings!!
Lane Avatar
August 11, 2023 at 6:33 AM
Sam, your comments always offer so much encouragement, and I'm really grateful for each of them. Thanks so very much for sharing that spot with you!
Hamilton Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 8:01 AM
Too many great lines to quote, congrats Lin on potd and a great win.
Lane Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 9:08 AM
Hi JD and thank you very much.
Alex Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 4:06 AM
"A temper makes foolish ones lose all sense of reason. They may even betray themselves in an act of treason" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
Lindley Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 8:48 AM
Another creation that further proves to me that you are indeed a master poet! A favorite, God bless.
Lane Avatar
August 8, 2023 at 9:08 AM
;-). Thank you, Robert
Lindley Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 1:53 PM
Ahh methinks your modesty is another fine character trait you possess. Your poetry always stirs me to write! As it has already done today... God bless.
Lane Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 10:32 AM
Robert, it's a stretch for me to even call myself a 'poet,' but a master I am not. As a long time, valued friend, I will smile and say, 'thank you.'
Poet Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Hearty congratulations to you, Lin, on your well-deserved accolade as the POTD. Your verses are adorned with a tapestry of captivating imagery and evocative descriptions. Enjoy your honor dear friend
Lane Avatar
August 7, 2023 at 8:40 AM
Thank you for such complimentary remarks, Lasaad. They're greatly appreciated.
Mcintosh Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 1:13 AM
Such pain they must have, though... Congrats on POTD! God bless you. Love, Gina
Lane Avatar
August 6, 2023 at 1:40 AM
Good morning, Gina and thank you. Feeling anger can cause pain, but it’s a pain that can be controlled by cutting the root cause, especially if it’s unwarranted.
Darnell Sr Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 3:23 PM
Hi, Lin, Wow, a powerful message in your eloquent penning! Congratulations on POTD, and well deserved! Best Wishes, William PS; a fav too!
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Thanks ever so much for your thoughts and for adding it to your favorite list, William.
Parker Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 2:39 PM
James 3:1-6
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 2:48 PM
The tongue can be difficult to bridle, and cause us to stumble. Change is needed to avoid the pitfalls along that unrighteous path. Thank you for commenting.
Andresen Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 2:24 PM
- A lot said in a powerful poem, Lin - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 2:49 PM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise.
Slaughter Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 11:04 AM
One of the hardest things for humans to learn, it seems, is to think before you speak. Excellent piece...and reminder...for POTD.
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 12:23 PM
Hi Jim. You're right about the tendency we have to be too quick to speak when we shouldn't. We could suggest putting a governor on the tongues of children when they are learning to speak ;-) Seriously, thank you for your kind thoughts.
May Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 10:09 AM
They are being wrecked by not keeping anger in check, Powerful and well penned Lin, Congrats on POTD
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Thanks for the congrats and the rhyming comment, Joseph.
Cunningham Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 9:49 AM
A verse full of great wisdom Lin, a giant Greek congratulations from me. A well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 10:53 AM
Hello, Mayor Tom. Thank you and have some mousaka. You are terribly missed!
Goyal Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 7:45 AM
I like it, it has a great message. Congrats on the well deserved POTD :-)
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 10:51 AM
I’m glad you thought so. Thanks, Arastu.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 7:40 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Wonderful Write. So True. Fav... Have a blessed/great weekend with your win..............
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Thanks, Paula. Enjoy your weekend as well.
Baker Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 7:23 AM
A FAV for my list, Lin. Another poem filled with wisdom and great advice. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 10:50 AM
Thanks ever so much, Bill. Have a great weekend.
Kitchin Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Lin, wonderfully penned and a great message too! Congratulations on POTD! Hugs.
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 7:11 AM
Thanks so much, Tania. It's usually the ones it was meant for who will ignore it. C'est La vie
Kaufman Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 5:32 AM
Congratulations Ms. Lin on this most deserving and eloquent poem of the day. It's a timely one for me, as I have been praying for the new condo owner above my unit who has chronic pain issues, while he lies and defames me. I truly feel sorry for these sad souls but try to keep clear of their negativity.
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Thank you Ms. Nancy ;-) Oh goodness! I feel so sad to learn of your plight with your upstairs neighbor. You're going about dealing with him in a positive manner, but there must be something that can be done. Is there an HOA you can appeal to about him? It's difficult to keep clear of such a person when he literally lives above you.
Gentile Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 4:39 AM
Congratulations Lin on your POYD honors! An outstanding write outlining the pitfalls of anger!! Enjoy your day xxoo
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Thank you very much, Mike and have yourself a fun weekend!
M  Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 1:05 AM
Congratulations Lin on POTD….too much anger in this world for sure! Lovely Lin poem! Debx
Lane Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 7:06 AM
Thanks so much, Deb. Yes, there is and much of it is unwarranted.
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