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No One Gets It Right

A  ritual of mating,
  the God of lust
  conferring no blessing
  on either sex.
  just a heated dance
  around each other
  testing the already
  sullied waters 
  with dirt feet
  worn out on a path
  tread once too often.

  But then it was
  something no one got 
  right, right?
  women too scared
  men overeager
  or girls brazenly
  bold with boys
  too decent for
  games in the dark.

  married couples 
  acting like siblings
  sister playing wife
  to brother dear,
  cousins getting
  away with everything
  and the old saintly
  by default.

  A mixed business 
  it is I am certain.
  No one gets it right.
  everyone with large 
  appetites  for flesh
  flesh and then more
  flesh.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2005




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Date: 12/6/2024 8:02:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/10/2017 1:42:00 PM
A very beautiful written poem, you ve expressed your thoughts beautifully, every line is better than another, welcome to poetrysoup and remind me when you post your next poem however I m new on this site and also from pakistan and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 3/16/2016 11:24:00 PM
AYESHA AHMED, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing you're poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/14/2016 10:58:00 PM
AYESHA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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