No, Really
NO, REALLY. . . . . .
‘That dress is nice’ means it is ok but it hardly amazes
‘No honestly, that dress is really nice’ means it is kinda nice-ish, oooh.
For genuine admiration I need to add more reassurance phrases:
‘No, honestly, I absolutely think it is nice - I really do’
‘Are you busy?’ means “ I’ve got a problem: stop and listen”
Indirect way of implying concern for the other, but not really.
But “ I’m busy” means “Don’t come to me to unburden,
Don’t start getting emotional and all touchy-feely.”
“How are you? Hey, lookin’ good” is a harmless salutation
But please don’t give me any detailed answer, just nod.
I don’t have time for a complete and thorough investigation
Of all which is due to your health, your wealth and your God.
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Written by Sydney Peck
Entered in Nancy Jones’s Contest When I Say.... what I really mean is...
Copyright © Sidney Beck | Year Posted 2012
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