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Nits Hatch - She'Ll Scratch

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Louise has fleas And nits – the pits! Scratch head In bed Sore bites from mites Sleeps bad goes mad Bedding - shedding Gets cross with boss (Itchy B itchy) Feels rough buys stuff Lotions potions Bug foam nit comb Prepare cleanse hair Comb through shampoo Hair washed lice quashed Nit free - happy! FOOTLE-me Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand 12/18/20

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/2/2021 7:30:00 AM

LOL, just realised I was scratching my head as I read this : ) LOL, had a chuckle at these, my friend

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 12:01:00 PM

I'm scratching now jack:-( hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2020 12:58:00 PM

haha. how did I miss THIS set?? Big belated congrats. I actually relate to this one because our daughter picked up those awful things from a carnival ride (I am sure that's what it was) we discovered the crap as we drove home from Iowa and had to find lice shampoo on our drive. Luckily my son , I and hubbie never got it but her case was so bad that we had to cut off all her beautiful long hair because the nits just wouldnt' come off it. ugggg

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 12:01:00 PM

thanks Andrea, son had them at school thankfully i never have... but i still keep hold of the comb:-( hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 12/22/2020 6:04:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jan..

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 12:00:00 PM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/19/2020 7:49:00 PM

An uplifting, inspirational nits/fleas footle! What a great holiday treat for the sponsor and all those who read it! Holiday Joy, Gershon

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:59:00 AM

thanks GW i expect anyone who reads it gets itchy as i did writing it lol:-) hugs jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/19/2020 3:16:00 PM

What a great footle series, Jan, and I laughed at the infected person's dilemma. Can't imagine using a "nit comb." Best wishes for a win in Brian's contest! Hugs, carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:57:00 AM

Ive still got a nit comb from when son was at school... just in case i get caught out when doing the exam work, its unlikely but I am hanging onto the comb lol:-) hugs jan xx

Barry Stebbings

Date: 12/19/2020 7:47:00 AM

That should make the grade Jan, Good Luck. // Barry

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:56:00 AM

thanks Barry:-) hugs jan xx

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/19/2020 5:25:00 AM

Wow. this is amazing. Love it. God B L E S S you

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:51:00 AM

thanks Regina:-) hugs jan xx

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 12/19/2020 1:54:00 AM

An excellent Footle Jan, gives one the itch just reading it... Hugs ~ Belle xx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:50:00 AM

i think I held off replying to comments because it made me itch like it is now lol:-) hugs jan xx

John Watt

Date: 12/18/2020 11:18:00 PM

Oh you are SO GOOD with these footles Jan, and now i know you can write about absolutely any subject! Fun to read, I hope it was as fun to write. hugs ~ John

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:50:00 AM

I itched all throughout the writing John lol its such a fun form I love writing it:-) hugs jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 12/18/2020 4:08:00 PM

You must be a mother to know so much about it! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:48:00 AM

My son caught them from school... i still have the nit comb just in case i get them when I go in to do exam support:-( hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 12/18/2020 1:30:00 PM

Very nicely done Jan, an itchy situation..

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:48:00 AM

Thanks Joseph:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/18/2020 12:02:00 PM

Lol!Jan, You told such a relatable story. My skin is crawling just reading it. I knew you would do a great job with this form. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:47:00 AM

im itching too Alexis!:-( hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/18/2020 11:51:00 AM

Lol, don't they make your skin crawl. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:47:00 AM

they sure do Tom, sorry for the delay in replying:-( hugs jan xx

Bobby May

Date: 12/18/2020 11:44:00 AM

Hahahahaha I love this my friends child just went thought this, this is great Sis!

Jan Allison
Date: 1/2/2021 11:46:00 AM

its horrid Bobby, i feel itchy now lol:-) hugs jan xx