Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Nirvana

Just you and me, cogitating intently, placidly,
Contemplating peaceably, balance of being,
Listening to birdsongs jubilantly serenading 
Tranquility luxuriating upon hills and valleys
Where bees on blossoms propagate symbiosis
Amid euphonic winds soothing glint evening
Caressing buoyancy on ebb and flow of tides
When, upon golden arc, sunbeams subside 
Scintillating leisurely amber glow of eventide
Congruent on horizon where pelicans glide
Hushed in sunset ochre, etching crimson sky
On quiescent ocean shore lost in idyllic vibes
Just you and me, placid, in amity of seaside
Calming pulsing beats, consoling complexity,
Breathing-in holy serenity, exhaling impurity~ 
Transcendent feelings, blissfully in harmony.

September 20, 2021
Placed 1st: “N” Poems, New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Anil Deo January 13, 2022 at 10:33 AM Vijay, titles like Nirvana draw me, meaning bliss or break out, also of having my daughter named Nirvana. Your poems are singular when they use colors, speak colorfully. Thanx

Delice Arleen Skelly September 24, 2021 at 8:56 AM Nice entry into the contest Vijay...Quote: Breathing-in holy serenity, exhaling impurity~ Transcendent feelings, blissfully in harmony....(I do like how you ended this piece)...Delice Vijay Pandit September 28, 2021 at 9:29 AM Thank you Delice--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich September 23, 2021 at 4:26 PM bLISSFUL indeed, Vijay. And I see a winner in the contest. Congrats to you. Vijay Pandit September 24, 2021 at 5:54 AM Glad you liked the poem, Andrea--very special coming from you. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands September 23, 2021 at 5:51 AM Oh my Vijay! I love this beautiful poem. Relaxing and comforting. A Fave for me. Well done! :) Vijay Pandit September 24, 2021 at 5:53 AM Much appreciate, as always, Heidi. Many thanks for your kind remarks. And very special thank you for the FAVE.

Mystic Rose Rose September 22, 2021 at 5:31 PM Holy Serenity, now that is something we can all use these days, and you poetry speaks volumes here, way to go Vijay Vijay Pandit September 24, 2021 at 5:51 AM Thank you my friend for stopping by with your kind remarks. Many thanks, Vienna.

Constance La France September 22, 2021 at 3:01 PM Vijay, congratulations on your win in my N contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance Vijay Pandit September 24, 2021 at 5:50 AM Always an honor--thank you Constance. Much appreciate your kind remarks. And special thanks for holding contests.

Sandra Adams September 21, 2021 at 7:50 AM This is gorgeous Vijay... love all the nature within this one...i always feel at peace when surrounded by nature, especially the ocean! love love love this one! hugs Vijay Pandit September 24, 2021 at 5:49 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments my friend. Many thanks for stopping by, Sandy.

Demetrios Trifiatis September 21, 2021 at 6:16 AM Exaltation of poetic creativity that helps one reach the apex of NIRVANA! A FAVE, my friend, Vijay! Blessings. Vijay Pandit September 21, 2021 at 7:51 AM Your blessings are precious my friend. And so is a FAVE from you, Demetrios. Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile September 21, 2021 at 5:19 AM Your portrait of Nirvana is truly heavenly Vijay and for me true and passionate love is also the perfect description of eternal bliss! Best for the contest! Happy Tuesday! Vijay Pandit September 21, 2021 at 7:49 AM You have a wonderful day and the rest of the week as well, Mike. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many many thanks.

Supraja Kannan September 21, 2021 at 5:10 AM Amazing imagery!!! Vijay Pandit September 21, 2021 at 7:48 AM Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Victor Buhagiar September 21, 2021 at 2:08 AM A heavenly description in verse. Your use of imagery is incredible. This should be first place. Vijay Pandit September 21, 2021 at 7:47 AM Thank you Victor for expressing your support with these kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments as always. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman September 20, 2021 at 10:52 PM LOve this Vijay, tops for the contest, Harry Vijay Pandit September 21, 2021 at 7:46 AM Glad you stopped by Harry with your pleasing feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet September 20, 2021 at 7:28 PM I loved this incredible poem and especially these two verses: Calming pulsing beats, consoling complexity, Breathing-in holy serenity, exhaling impurity. Your flawless wording and wonderful metaphors are breathtaking, Vijay. My very best wishes with the contest. Vijay Pandit September 21, 2021 at 7:45 AM You are so very kind, Lasaad. Much appreciate the time you take to write detailed feedback. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole September 20, 2021 at 7:07 PM "On quiescent ocean shore lost in idyllic vibes" Soft sigh. Such a magical, yet breathtaking moment indeed. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit September 21, 2021 at 7:44 AM Thank you for your delightful remarks Brandy. Always a joy to read your comments. Many thanks.

Unseeking Seeker September 20, 2021 at 8:47 AM Soothing! Good luck in the contest, Vijay Vijay Pandit September 21, 2021 at 7:43 AM Thanks for stopping by US. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Tom Cunningham September 20, 2021 at 7:28 AM You captured Nirvana so well with superb imagery Vijay. I predict a top win with this one. Enjoy the week ahead. Tom Vijay Pandit September 21, 2021 at 7:43 AM Much appreciate your valued opinion and vote of confidence, Tom. Many thanks for your kind remarks.