Nirvana

Just you and me, cogitating intently, placidly, Contemplating peaceably, balance of being, Listening to birdsongs jubilantly serenading Tranquility luxuriating upon hills and valleys Where bees on blossoms propagate symbiosis Amid euphonic winds soothing glint evening Caressing buoyancy on ebb and flow of tides When, upon golden arc, sunbeams subside Scintillating leisurely amber glow of eventide Congruent on horizon where pelicans glide Hushed in sunset ochre, etching crimson sky On quiescent ocean shore lost in idyllic vibes Just you and me, placid, in amity of seaside Calming pulsing beats, consoling complexity, Breathing-in holy serenity, exhaling impurity~ Transcendent feelings, blissfully in harmony. September 20, 2021 Placed 1st: “N” Poems, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France

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Anil Deo

Date: 1/13/2022 10:33:00 AM

Vijay, titles like Nirvana draw me, meaning bliss or break out, also of having my daughter named Nirvana. Your poems are singular when they use colors, speak colorfully. Thanx

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/24/2021 8:56:00 AM

Nice entry into the contest Vijay...Quote: Breathing-in holy serenity, exhaling impurity~ Transcendent feelings, blissfully in harmony....(I do like how you ended this piece)...Delice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/28/2021 9:29:00 AM

Thank you Delice--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2021 4:26:00 PM

bLISSFUL indeed, Vijay. And I see a winner in the contest. Congrats to you.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2021 5:54:00 AM

Glad you liked the poem, Andrea--very special coming from you. Much appreciate. Many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/23/2021 5:51:00 AM

Oh my Vijay! I love this beautiful poem. Relaxing and comforting. A Fave for me. Well done! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2021 5:53:00 AM

Much appreciate, as always, Heidi. Many thanks for your kind remarks. And very special thank you for the FAVE.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/22/2021 5:31:00 PM

Holy Serenity, now that is something we can all use these days, and you poetry speaks volumes here, way to go Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2021 5:51:00 AM

Thank you my friend for stopping by with your kind remarks. Many thanks, Vienna.

Constance La France

Date: 9/22/2021 3:01:00 PM

Vijay, congratulations on your win in my N contest with this excellent poem, splendid writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2021 5:50:00 AM

Always an honor--thank you Constance. Much appreciate your kind remarks. And special thanks for holding contests.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/21/2021 7:50:00 AM

This is gorgeous Vijay... love all the nature within this one...i always feel at peace when surrounded by nature, especially the ocean! love love love this one! hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2021 5:49:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments my friend. Many thanks for stopping by, Sandy.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/21/2021 6:16:00 AM

Exaltation of poetic creativity that helps one reach the apex of NIRVANA! A FAVE, my friend, Vijay! Blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2021 7:51:00 AM

Your blessings are precious my friend. And so is a FAVE from you, Demetrios. Glad you liked the poem. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.

Mike Gentile

Date: 9/21/2021 5:19:00 AM

Your portrait of Nirvana is truly heavenly Vijay and for me true and passionate love is also the perfect description of eternal bliss! Best for the contest! Happy Tuesday!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2021 7:49:00 AM

You have a wonderful day and the rest of the week as well, Mike. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many many thanks.

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/21/2021 5:10:00 AM

Amazing imagery!!!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2021 7:48:00 AM

Thank you Supraja--much appreciate.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/21/2021 2:08:00 AM

A heavenly description in verse. Your use of imagery is incredible. This should be first place.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2021 7:47:00 AM

Thank you Victor for expressing your support with these kind remarks. Much appreciate your visit and comments as always. Many thanks.

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/20/2021 10:52:00 PM

LOve this Vijay, tops for the contest, Harry

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2021 7:46:00 AM

Glad you stopped by Harry with your pleasing feedback. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/20/2021 7:28:00 PM

I loved this incredible poem and especially these two verses: Calming pulsing beats, consoling complexity, Breathing-in holy serenity, exhaling impurity. Your flawless wording and wonderful metaphors are breathtaking, Vijay. My very best wishes with the contest.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2021 7:45:00 AM

You are so very kind, Lasaad. Much appreciate the time you take to write detailed feedback. Many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/20/2021 7:07:00 PM

"On quiescent ocean shore lost in idyllic vibes" Soft sigh. Such a magical, yet breathtaking moment indeed. Your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. This is beautiful in every way. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2021 7:44:00 AM

Thank you for your delightful remarks Brandy. Always a joy to read your comments. Many thanks.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/20/2021 8:47:00 AM

Soothing! Good luck in the contest, Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2021 7:43:00 AM

Thanks for stopping by US. Much appreciate your visit and comments.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/20/2021 7:28:00 AM

You captured Nirvana so well with superb imagery Vijay. I predict a top win with this one. Enjoy the week ahead. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/21/2021 7:43:00 AM

Much appreciate your valued opinion and vote of confidence, Tom. Many thanks for your kind remarks.