Nip It In the Bud

When bad guys came through causing strife
in Mayberry, fraidy-cat Fife,
the lawman who never
was dauntless and clever,
could not catch them to save his life.

Huge blunders caused people to mock
and point at this town’s laughing stock.
Still, this scrawny fellow,                    
whose back wore a yellow
streak, boasted. His claims were a crock.


The title is my favorite Barney-ism. 

Don Knotts's leaving The Andy Griffith Show crippled it

February 10, 2019. entered in Joseph May's Limerick IV Contest
     Placed 3rd
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Gauthier Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 7:40 PM
Well done, Janice. Congrats on your win.
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 10:07 PM
Thanks so much, Line. Janice
Dietrich Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 7:04 PM
You did quite well with your limerick description of him. I chose this loony character too . Congrats for your win, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 1:47 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice
Kendrick Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 5:15 PM
Dropping back by with congrats. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 5:23 PM
Thanks, Sara! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Congratulations on your win Janice. Tom.
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 5:23 PM
Thanks, Tom. Janice
Faulkner Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 1:26 PM
Don Knotts was a comedic genius, he made Barney Fife so lovable - congratulations on your win, Janice!
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 5:24 PM
Thanks, Michelle. Janice
Hinshaw Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 11:39 AM
Congrats for your well-deserved win, Janice! You described Barney to a T! Thx for your gracious comment re my entry in the contest - Bob
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 4:08 PM
Thanks so much, Robert. And you're welcome! Janice
Devonshire Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 9:21 AM
You certainly captured bumbling Barney's character, Janice. Enjoyed your limerick! Congrats on your win in Joseph's contest, Carolyn
Canerdy Avatar
March 2, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thanks so much, Carolyn!
Kendrick Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 10:47 AM
Good one about Barney. I always loved that character and also the character of Sheriff Any Taylor. They say that the program was based on a real sheriff somewhere. Thanks for dropping by and for soup mail.Sara
Canerdy Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Thank YOU, Sara. Janice
Blown Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 8:41 AM
barney knots...treasure of an era
Canerdy Avatar
February 13, 2019 at 5:29 PM
Indeed, he was, Sand.
Pandit Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 6:43 AM
You have fond memories of that show..some great acting..not easy to play stupid as he did. Your poem is spot on..best for a win, Janice.
Canerdy Avatar
February 11, 2019 at 7:37 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Knotts was a genius comic actor. Janice
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