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Nineseventeenpm

tick tock nineseventeen o’clock clouds have parted and the reign of Christ has begun shocked at the pm sideswipe people stare and scratch their heads twilight of a new day as the sun shines like never before scene of agape amour a monumental throne approachable and serendipitous
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though time itself has stopped heaven’s opened up with seraphim and cherubim look see look see excellence is on the throne no one’s sick no one’s poor glorious eyes surprised nineseventeenpm a coined word absolute 7/10/2018

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Date: 7/11/2018 9:43:00 AM
Tough verse. Great Composition.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2018 11:00:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha!
Date: 7/11/2018 9:23:00 AM
"no one’s sick no one’s poor glorious eyes surprised" What a lovely thought; let's hold onto that one. Great piece.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2018 9:30:00 AM
Thank you, M.L.!
Date: 7/11/2018 6:25:00 AM
This could win it all, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/11/2018 7:56:00 AM
:) Thanks, Lyric!

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