Nineseventeenpm

It's nineseventeenPM.
and here I am again.
I truly need to sleep,
and rise as day doth peep.
I lie in bed thinking,
feeling very romantic. 
Turnin' and tossin
Tossin and turnin'
imagining kissing
each part of his body.
I sure need a hot toddy. 
My eyes are growing dim, 
"I have loved none but him."

6/28/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Krutsinger Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 11:46 AM
Very sweet and romantic, nicely penned, Eve.
Dietrich Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 8:23 PM
oh the picture drew me in so fast. I HAVE That album with the picture on it!! I hope I can come up with a quick cute poem like you did, Eve. I am way behind here at Soup this week. OH MY!!
Rose  Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 5:53 PM
smother him with kisses, from his misses, nice one Eve.
Warrior Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 9:41 AM
A hot toddy boddy lol...great read Eve...love & light...^WW^
Man Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 5:02 AM
Eve.. that's a lucky fellow and yet there's more to this poem than just him.. very creative!
Vaso Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 1:03 AM
Oh my this is both sensual but very deep with meaning, such a beautiful write!!!
Manassian Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 10:34 PM
Oh....how absolutely delightful, dear....Love would make one toss and turn in anticipation. :) Hugs, dear one.
Roper Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 10:38 PM
I'm so lucky I got a visit from two beautiful ladies... Thank you for your inspiring compliment.. hugs Eve
Deschler Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 10:29 PM
The passion flows throughout your poem so smoothly along with it's wonderful rhymes ... Nicely done, Eve!
Roper Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 10:37 PM
I am so lucky, I got a visit from two lovely ladies. I thank you for your inspiring compliment hugs Eve
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