Nine Girls Then Li'L Ole Me

Life has many ups and downs Personally more ups than downs A happy long life with many more years A bunch more smiles than frowns Surely one of the fortunate ones The genes were a very huge factor Ten kiddies and us at a baseball game We had our own cheering sector Nine were girls and then li'l ole me The talk of our little old burg The Ellison's have finally produced a boy Biggest news our town had heard Dancing in the streets, parties all night A celebrity at a tender young age Predicted to be spoiled with all those girls To fawn over this sweet wee babe Turned out sweet, a stunning specimen Can still bring it can still have fun It's getting tougher and tougher, though That's about it and I'm done! Well that's my life in a nutshell, my friends Unique I guess you could say In this modern age of smaller families Our story is rare nowadays

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Date: 2/12/2022 1:52:00 PM
Happy Jack, You were raised in a big family. There is certainly a lot of memories. I'll bet you wouldn't trade any of them for the world. Thanks for sharing one happy memory. I enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/13/2022 6:04:00 AM
Usually people's immediate reaction is "wow you must have been spoiled" Not true... can only remember may half of them living at home!!! XOX
Date: 2/12/2022 11:38:00 AM
Hello Happy Jack, You had your big sisteeres to protect you. They took care of you. As well as having fun times with you. Love, Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/13/2022 1:05:00 PM
Hello Happy Jack, yes it looks like tome to be one big happy family. Love, Dafrlene xxxx-oooo.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/13/2022 6:06:00 AM
One BIG happy family! Love, Happy Jack! XOX
Date: 2/12/2022 10:26:00 AM
You've had one hell of a ride Jack, bet you wouldn't change a thing. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/12/2022 10:36:00 AM
Not a thing! Had a great one but I ain't done yet! Cheers my good friend!
Date: 2/12/2022 7:33:00 AM
Nice to meet you dear Jack Ellison. I'm delighted to read your poem. A happy family for sure. When I was young, to be the only girl among the 3 made me wish for more.. Thank you very much for sharing your awesome poem. God bless you.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 2/12/2022 8:26:00 AM
Hello Len! Big family eh... very unusual by today's standards eh! Have very little memories of my older sister though! Too much difference in age! Nice to meet meet... love Jack XOX
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