Nil By Mouth

Plink. Plink.

Drip...
follows drop,
follows drip,
follows drop.

Plink. Plink.

Resolutely, incessantly,
each precious globule
snakes, languidly, along
labyrinthine tunnel.

Plink. Plink.

Seemingly-innocuous fluid
conveys crucial content
and necessary nourishment:
sole source of sustenance.

Plink. Plink.

Life-affirming droplets
are welcomed, eagerly, into
damaged vessel's system.

Plink. Plink.

Naught but air to pass lips,
"NBM" had been decreed.

Plink. Plink.

Temporarily,
    but indelibly,
        branded.

Plink. Plink.

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8 October 2017

NBM / Nil by Mouth is a medical instruction to prevent patients from consuming any food or water orally, often replaced by intravenous fluids.

Submitted to Julia Ward's "Your Favourite Free Verse Poem From October 2017 or November 2017" contest.
(2nd Place)

Entered in Butterfly Wings' "Could You, Please" contest.
(6th Place)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/6/2018 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on Julia's contest...nicely done...
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John Michaels
Date: 11/7/2018 7:09:00 AM
Thanks very much, Eve. I'm pleased that I was able to turn such a horrible experience into something positive!! All the best, John.
Date: 11/5/2018 6:32:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, John.
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John Michaels
Date: 11/6/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thanks very much, Line. Same goes for you! Regards, John.
Date: 11/5/2018 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Julia Ward's contest! Good stuff :)) xomo
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John Michaels
Date: 11/5/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thanks for the great comments, Maureen! Much appreciated. Regards, John.
Date: 11/5/2018 2:46:00 AM
Unique and highly deserving in my contest asking for a favourite free verse poem from October or November last year. Well done for its second place win, John. Julia
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John Michaels
Date: 11/5/2018 10:28:00 AM
Thanks very much for my placement! I'm glad you liked it! Regards, John.
Date: 10/23/2017 8:09:00 AM
Wow! Great work of genius! Congrats John, for your WIN in the contest! ;-)
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John Michaels
Date: 10/23/2017 1:37:00 PM
Thanks for the amazing feedback, Teddy! Pleased you liked it. All the best, John.
Date: 10/21/2017 9:23:00 AM
John, congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative write !
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John Michaels
Date: 10/23/2017 1:25:00 PM
Thank you for running the contest - and for my placement! Regards, John.
Date: 10/20/2017 11:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John, intresting ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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John Michaels
Date: 10/23/2017 1:31:00 PM
Thanks, Eve - appreciate the kind comments. Regards, John.
Date: 10/20/2017 6:13:00 PM
...back with congratulations!
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John Michaels
Date: 10/23/2017 1:18:00 PM
Thanks so much, Maureen.
Date: 10/14/2017 7:03:00 AM
Incidentally, visited a friend of mine in hospital this morning; she's on the drip and is not allowed anything else. You treat this topic creatively, John. Regards // paul
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John Michaels
Date: 10/14/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thanks, Paul! When hooked up to one and with nothing to do, the mind tends to wander - this is where my muse took me. Regards, John.
Date: 10/8/2017 8:59:00 PM
oh you taught me a new thing today. I never heard NMB before. Nicely done.
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John Michaels
Date: 10/14/2017 5:35:00 AM
Was new to me too, until a couple of weeks ago. I know it's a bit of a random write, but was just my way of dealing. All the best, John.
Date: 10/8/2017 11:04:00 AM
Wild pen!
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John Michaels
Date: 10/14/2017 5:35:00 AM
Thanks, Maureen. Hopefully that's "wild" in a good way :)!! Regards, John.
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