Nikko's Sibling's Troll

Wow, this is way too hard
I don't think I can do it
Okay, it's still worth a try
Finding a word to fit

I'll try to say all that I can
And not say anything at all
This brain is way too ignorant
And words now starting to crawl

Nikko's sibling is a villian
For thinking of this pain
It's way too hard and I can't do it
It's a path with nothing to gain

This brain is on vacation
And far away is this goal
I want to say to Nikko's sibling
Thanks a lot for this troll

Okay, I know that I can't win it
For again I can't find a word
I think that I will stop right now
And possibly I'll win third



For Nikko's Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 7/7/2010 5:57:00 PM
Fourth place - not too shabby. Congrats and kudos to you. Ralph
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Date: 7/3/2010 7:44:00 PM
Lol! You did it, and you thought you couldn't! ; )..... Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/3/2010 9:12:00 AM
If your brain was on vacation when you wrote this ditty, then I can only imagine what it would have been like if you worked on it! Congrats on your win in the contest! Dan C
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:22:00 PM
Larry I am surprised you didn't win if only for saying all that funny stuff about her sister! Congrats, this was one of my favorites! LUv,Andrea
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Date: 7/2/2010 11:05:00 AM
Many congratulations Larry on your win in Nikko's contest with this gem >> James
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Date: 7/2/2010 9:20:00 AM
Congratulations Larry on your fabulous poem being in the spotlight in Nikko Palmario's contest "Life without U & Me". It sure was a challenge. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:44:00 AM
Congrat's Larry on your well deserved win! I knew this one was a winner!~Tirzah~
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Date: 7/2/2010 8:20:00 AM
Got a chuckle out of this one. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Nikko's contest. Enjoy your success. Keep on writing. Karen
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Date: 7/2/2010 7:39:00 AM
You almost got third, Larry!! just shy of one place-- hahaha and that' s because you called my sister a "villain"--kidding--honestly, it was because you didn't read my blog telling you about your typo in "villain"--kidding again--haha totally enjoyed reading that she's a villain, and my sister enjoyed reading this too--haha very clever and witty write you have here,great rhyme as well!! Congrats on your 4th place win ^_^ --nikko :)
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Date: 7/2/2010 7:34:00 AM
Congrats Larry on your winning poem in Nikko's great contest with this wonderful write without the letters m e and u as only Larry can do.. enjoy my friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii ..AlohA... at 4 a.m..
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Date: 6/25/2010 5:44:00 AM
I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Larry. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/24/2010 9:06:00 PM
ha ha, great entry for Nikko's tricky challenge, enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 6/24/2010 5:04:00 PM
win third?? don't take my slot! LOL just teasing.
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Date: 6/24/2010 12:38:00 PM
You have a great shot in this contest, Buddy. This entry is awesome. Good luck. ... Ralph
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Date: 6/24/2010 11:56:00 AM
I enjoyed this Larry, you did a great job.. WN
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Date: 6/24/2010 11:48:00 AM
Really cute -- nice approach to this contest, Larry! I can't seem to accomplish this challenge, but I wish you luck. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/24/2010 10:54:00 AM
I Loved it Larry- this is one difficult contest!~Tirzah~
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