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Robert J. Lindley,
My second poem written on the greatest dark poetry author, the Master Poet, Edgar Allen Poe.
Started -- November 9th, 1973
Finished - this morn, April 2nd, 2018

Note- I truly wish that I had finished this back 45 years ago, as I feel my current writing does not measure up. Why I left this half finished I have no memory- but finish the piece I felt that I must.

Nightmares and Master Poe's Greatest Riddle

Nightmares and Master Poe's Greatest Riddle

I took a silver fork, gold spoon and rusty knife
trying to cut away the dark stains in my life,
with each slice I stood aghast, dumbfounded finding more
chained was I, in torture room without any floor.

On its walls hung hands and heads of the blackest dead,
all its walls washed in blood so very, very red,
angry shadows that would reach out to stab at will
for my every anguished moan gave them a great thrill.

An eternity, night bled as it slowly passed,
not enough time to pay for my dark sins amassed,
each morn came revelation, just before dawn's break
next to me was he, Master Poe bound to a stake.

He would wake, speak to me as if a long lost friend,
promise this paradise, my time would never end
and then summon his Raven to chide me as well
laughing loud, saying, welcome my friend to my Hell.

I begged, Master Poe, release me, let me go
I beg you, Lord and Master of this horror show,
I see you control all in this evil abode
lessen thy dark-handed grip, release thy firm hold.

With a sardonic smile he would give his reply
off you go, return each night my Raven shall fly,
to this dark curse, I gave my sorrowful reply
please Master Poe, tell me, tell me the reason why.

His echoes rang as away my torn body flew
Raven leaves Hades at midnight's stroke is your clue,
with its flight comes both sweet pleasures and epic pains
one for truest of love, other for darkest of stains.

Now I wrestled for years this riddle, its vague clue
sought out every wise man, this one thing I knew,
the truest of love was his, Master Poe's Annabel Lee
but how, how could that tidbit ever free me?

Tonight I pray that this tired, pleading soul may rest
as I live in pain on this Poe torturing quest,
my plea pitiful but true to this old poet's heart,
please give me the riddle's answer, so life can restart!

Robert J. Lindley,
My second poem written on the greatest dark poetry author, the Master Poet, Edgar Allen Poe.
Started -- November 9th, 1973
Finished - this morn, April 2nd, 2018

Note- I truly wish that I had finished this back 45 years ago, as I feel my current writing does not measure up. Why I left this half finished I have no memory- but finish the piece I felt that I must.
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Lindley Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 7:07 AM
Deleted.... double post..
Warrior Avatar
April 9, 2018 at 10:17 AM
A brilliant piece my friend on the master of dark verse...Poe is one of my inspirations for writing poetry...for I feel I can connect with him on many levels...stay in the light...^WW^
Lindley Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 8:08 AM
"Thank you my friend. My poetic lines, survived to give me a gift, that inspired me to finish this old poem fragment. Try as I may, I can not now remember why I abandoned it 45 years ago."
O.J. Hunt Avatar
April 4, 2018 at 2:40 AM
Superb write Robert, great Poe-like lines and very original, a fave;;-)
Lindley Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Thank you my friend. Sorry that I have been so lax, and not engaged here as much as I would like. Seems life has been throwing too many things at me as of late..
One Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 1:03 PM
Proof of a master poet who can still bleed his ink so perfectly...
Lindley Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thank you my friend. I wish I had the stamina, inspiration and dedication to writing now, that I had when in my late teens through my early forties. Now my muse has grown old with me and she is too oft sleeping methinks.
Downing  Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 8:47 AM
Oh wow, Rob, a very deep and dark masterpiece of art! I really enjoyed reading this... Simply superb!
Lindley Avatar
May 7, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Thank you my friend. I.truly wished that I had finished this when young, as I believe it would have been better
Gentile Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Robert, I think this piece is incredible and I agree, I found it gripping all the way through and a spot on tribute to Poe,' just EXCELLENT!!
Lindley Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Thank you my friend. Very pleased to hear that my friend. I sweated getting this ending right and it now appears I just may have hit the mark!
Ashley Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 8:45 PM
Robert , your POEtic lines immersed me in an enthralling darkness.. a deep and gripping poem rich in imagery and expressed with a potent pen, my friend. A fabulous poetic feat! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Lindley Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 8:41 AM
Thank you my friend. My POEtic lines, survived to give me a gift, as in inspiring me to finally finish this old poem fragment. Try as I may, I can not now remember why I abandoned it 45 years ago.
Duet Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 1:08 PM
Very dark and amazingly masterful, Robert. One that I will remember but try to forget!
Lindley Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 8:39 AM
Thank you my friend. I AM VERY PLEASED THAT YOU LIKED THIS DARK WRITE. I was worried that my finishing the poem did not match up well with verses started so long ago.
Hinshaw Avatar
April 2, 2018 at 9:51 AM
Robert, a Masterpiece by the Master of Verse! Kept me spellbound to the end! Bob H
Lindley Avatar
April 3, 2018 at 8:37 AM
Thank you my friend. Your kind comment makes me very glad that I resurrected and finished this old poem fragment. A hard one to write because to do Master Poe justice is no easy feat, IMHO.
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